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Deluca - Born Again (Reincarnated Mix)
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| Deluca |
Its my first post. any comments/suggestions are appreciated.
sorry about the link, just copy and paste it
http://s48.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1ZN696KKNLDVB28E6T4QFW4P07 |
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| DJ_Misho |
| I particurly enjoyed this one, has a very nice melody. I think you should lower the highs a bit on the climax but overall very solid song. Good work, keep it up |
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| sooper |
Hi,
This a chilled dark tune.. good atmosphere.
That weird skip thing in the perc groove took me a while to get used to.. sounds almost like a record skipping.
At 2:53 there are some very faint notes in the background that sound a little out of key and that continues on and off for a bit.
I like the change at 4:47 with the addition of the hi hats and new melodies. Up until then it was getting a bit repetitive.
Sometimes I hear distortion on some layers.. not sure what that is.
Overall, it's a pretty sweet tune with some good ideas.
Keep it up,
Trev |
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| Deluca |
| i defintely need some monitors, the headphones aint cutting it anymore, that might help with spotting the clipping a little more. ill keep you posted if you want, but thanks for the constructive crit. at this stage, i defintely need an outside opinion. |
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| Desty Nova |
| quote: | Originally posted by sooper
That weird skip thing in the perc groove took me a while to get used to.. sounds almost like a record skipping.
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Other than that, I really like what you got going on here. Synthwork is very good. :) |
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| .A.Y. |
hey man really chilling stuff you got here
really enjoyed this track
but i didn't really like this simple snare on 5:19
after a while it begins to sound nice but i don't know.. i would change him heh
anyway good track man! |
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| Germ |
Nice relaxed vibe!
It calls for a quiet moment by the sea with a glass of cool white wine ;)
Interesting textures you got yourself going in here. Going into my chill out folder.
The Germinator :crazy: |
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| Deluca |
ya that "scratch" perc might be overkill, maybe i'll tone it down but i like the "signature" sound it gives, ya now?
And im defintely a sucker for the chilled melodic tunes, so watch out for those in the future hehe
I'll b posting more songs soon to get your feedback, thanks again |
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