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[Tech/Hard/Uplift]SmoKe Me - Freaks My Ass
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| .A.Y. |
http://www.o-zen.com/art/bands/22/music.php
the build of the track is definetly not final version, everything comes too fast..
but overall this is how the full one will sound (and one day with monitors i'll fix the mixing)
tell me what ya think;)
thanks!
EDIT:
mm my soundcard is not working good and i forgat it..
so after hearing this track on an other soundcard ive heard that the bass is too hard, also too many lows, +the percs are too strong and distoreted..
i will fix it soon |
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| Axolotyl |
Mastering has some issues which you seem aware of so I wont go into those.
I like the melody buildup, its quite spacey and beautiful without being cheesy.
The style of percussion is pretty direct and pumping... quite like it.
Dont really get the bass sounds at the 3 min mark. Even though theres distortion, it sounds kinda hard trancey at the moment and a bit out of place. Maybe it will sound better once youve cleaned it up.
Like you said... needs better structure and mastering but I also think some more elements wouldnt go amiss. It might be hard to drag what you've got out over 6-7 minutes without it getting boring.
Anyway good start, keep working on it =) |
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| fabio_trevez |
lol the name is catchy!
the obvious has been said, so:
-at 2:46 the sound will be fine with more room.
-some saws are very dry but i think that u want it that way
-i really apreciate the duration, coz i hate 8 min tracks (nothing personal guys, just too much time listening to 2-3 mins intros).
it just needs some work here and there in the mixing and mastering. imo the build up is ok, it goes because the speed of the track.
i'll add the final version to my collection |
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| .A.Y. |
thanks guys
i'll try to fix what i can..;) |
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| cybernetica |
heya,
commenting as I listen...
the kick is fat, however I think it causes a little distortion.
I dont like the bass sound that much, I think you can improve it a little by lowering the cutoff a little. Maybe you should also consider gating it at some points, would maybe surprise the listener ;)
2:00 is a cool breakdown, that arp synth is nice, the breakbeat part is fat. Maybe I'd add a little heavy percussion in this part.
That sound starting at 2:46 is a nice idea, but I think it is a little distracting. But I dont know if what I'm saying about this is helpful since this is not really my genre ;) ... maybe try to refine the sound with wider stereo spread, maybe that will fatten it up.
Things seem to get a little overload here. You should spend especially work on mastering on the last part.
Anyway, it's a well made tune. Very fluent and it doesnt get boring at all, with good synths and stuff. However I agree with fabio that this seems a little too dry somehow. Keep it up :) |
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| Dj Cola |
the sound at 2:46 mark is kinda distracting but might give a necessery "structure". i would try to find a more background noise to fill that function.
nice track but there should be more "feeling". |
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| Germ |
Well you are right about the bass and general mixing problems so I won`t go into that.
The theme intro actually is cool as it cuts to the chase without long waisted preambles and that is something I like every now and then.
The short synth melody and the break where it is the main sound are excelent. really cool and moving without being way too busy. Actually I would shorten the second break where the distorted synths comes in and move strainght into the main theme.
Overall a nice tune with some diverse breaks and variations.
The Germinator:crazy: |
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