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New! Substorm - Arashi (radio edit)
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| substorm |
Hello!
So i said that i would upload an updated version and a club mix of my new track Arashi. Well it will be, but not for now.
Im in the middle of a signing on the track. So i have to take it away from soundclick.com. But for you whom liked it i will get back to you when its up for listening again.
Pease // Chriss |
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| iloop |
sounding clean :) i like that first synth, break melody reminds me of Ayu/barbers adagio a lot, though main melody overall is very nicelly done i think, and after the main melody the progression is great- i love that melody...
some minor things i noticed: bass is a bit weak and makes the track sound a bit thin(possibly just my headphones), ending is a bit cut off, though i realize its a radio edit...
great work, hope you put up the clubmix for listening too :) |
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| Jay M |
Bass needs far more power. There's some verb on the hats which take away the crispness of it. Track takes off too quickly, terrible for dj's. I'm not too fond of the kick here, sounds too hollow. Break with the dealyed synth is cool. Melody is hard too follow tho. Chord changes just arent right. But I like the upliftingness of the track.
Keep up. |
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| Arctic Breeze |
| I agree with Yarune on the reverbed hihats, and I don't like the kick. You should add some strings @ 1:15! And I think you should bring the melody in the main part more in front of the sound picture. |
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| sooper |
Hi,
Your percs are really cool and you've done some great drum fills. I agree with others that there seems to be a bit too much reverb...
The low end needs a boost to fill the space - sounds kinda empty right now.
Good job building intensity in the break - I like the urgency when everything kicks back in.
Overall it's a nice tune,
Trev |
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| substorm |
Thanks for your reviews, most appriciated.:D And im working on to boost up the bazz and turning down the reverb, becuse i agree on that.
And regarding your toughts about the track being to short, well i did my best making it a RADIO edit:tongue2. The club mix is under construction.
So the next time i post, it will be an updated radio edit and the club mix.
@Iloop: Gratīs on the 10th on audiojelly :toothless can i remix it? hehe... |
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| substorm |
| Update update update!! :P |
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