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Eternity ( A New Level of Trance)
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| Bigmmike |
Hey everyone,
I just released one of my best tracks I have ever produced.
The track was inspired by tons of signed / unsigned artist and I had many supporters when producing this track, so I hope everyone enjoys it.
Http://www.djhye.com under tracks "eternity"
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On Myspace should automatically start up.
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| EricR. |
Likes:
1. Nice catchy melody.
2. Song flows nicely.
3. Great Potential.
Could use some improving:
1. Goes right into the main melody, no build at all, and no build out.
2. A little too cheesy sounding.
3. Eternity is already the name of a classic song.
Overall: I really like this tune, and with a little work I think it really does have some serious potential. It does need a little work though. |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by EricR.
3. Eternity is already the name of a classic song.
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...and about 302514 other trance tunes... |
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| retiro |
Doesn't excite me unfortunatly! Servere lack of warmth and fullness to the track! You have used snares and a cheesey synth sound which is a no no!
Try utilizing your synth sounds better! You've listed you have a Virus TI and others which I would have expected a far better sound!
If cheese is your thing then why not go full hog and find a vocal to finish it off? |
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| Stino |
you are quite full of yourself arent u?
and then come up with such a cheezy sjit track lol. Basic samples, cheezy synth and no emotion or atmosphere at all. Especially bass/percussion are quite the suxors |
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| Bigmmike |
| Thanks for all the responses, actually all the equipment I have listed in small print on my site are the hardware Id really like to get lol yea I reallllllllly want the virus TI so I can get some better synths because that thing is amazing. Thanks for everyones advice, It all helps very much. |
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| sevenseas |
First, I dont think you've putted the hardware and stuff on your site with the idea of " I'd like to get my hands oon them someday" but more to brag of what you've "got".
Second, you dont need expensive equipment to create wonderful sounds, it's all about how to use the equipment you CAN affort.
Last, I dont like the tune. It's very cheesy, I cant believe youve had serious support on this one. It lacks of inspiration and arrangement. The samples are the most standard samples I've heard, and there's no climax at all. I know we all have to start somewere but if you yet create such cheesy tunes, you shouldnt think to high of yourselve and certainly dont brag. It's better to be real shy and let us do the reviewing.
thats all for now,
-Peter |
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| Bigmmike |
| quote: | Originally posted by sevenseas
First, I dont think you've putted the hardware and stuff on your site with the idea of " I'd like to get my hands oon them someday" but more to brag of what you've "got".
Second, you dont need expensive equipment to create wonderful sounds, it's all about how to use the equipment you CAN affort.
Last, I dont like the tune. It's very cheesy, I cant believe youve had serious support on this one. It lacks of inspiration and arrangement. The samples are the most standard samples I've heard, and there's no climax at all. I know we all have to start somewere but if you yet create such cheesy tunes, you shouldnt think to high of yourselve and certainly dont brag. It's better to be real shy and let us do the reviewing.
thats all for now,
-Peter |
Everyones got there own opinions. Everyone has there own taste. Im sure I can say If I listen your tracks, Id say hey this one is pretty sweet, but this other one sucks. Own Opinions.
Dont expect extremly crazy stuff even tho I am trying. Im only 16. |
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| sevenseas |
| Age also doesnt say a thing. Like you, I'm also 16 years old. And offcourse everyone has there own opinion and tastes but, you think very high of your tune, and you have to admit that you cant compete with most of the producers around the forum here yet. Just give it a little more time and you'll get better eventually. Dont expect that you'll reach the top producing level within a year. I can only say, keep producing and keep modest. |
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| Aquarian |
| quote: | Originally posted by Bigmmike
Everyones got there own opinions. Everyone has there own taste. |
First piece of crap I ever produced, and I had people going "OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING HOW'D YOU DO THAT?" :rolleyes:
Difference is, this is a board of fellow producers, some of whom have had some professional success. You should value their opinions over everyone else's, because they actually know what they're talking about. If you keep saying "oh well it's a matter of taste", you'll never improve, and you'll never get anywhere.
Oh and I was 15 when I started. I'm 19 now and I've improved tons but I still consider my sound sub-par and amateurish. Age really has nothing to do with it. |
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| Bigmmike |
I never said I was the best, I just said this was an amazing track produced. A producer usually doesnt like his/her own work. But I like it alot. But dont think im not listening to what everyones saying, I take everything into consideration.
In my next track Ill go back to the forums I posted and reread everything and take down notes. |
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| sevenseas |
| quote: | Originally posted by Bigmmike
A producer usually doesnt like his/her own work. |
I am really curious how you came up with the idea that a producer doesnt likes his own tunes, kinda strange dont you think? Why produce a tune if you dont like it anyway?? Sorry, but thats the most stupid statement I've ever heard. |
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