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| Jay M |
Hello,
I noticed I never posted this here. It's my first 100% Cubase track (Cloudland was first but that was half Fruity still), made a few months ago. I worked it through just a bit. Some elements I would do different now, but 'I can't be arsed' to redo the whole track.
If you're browsing this forum longer may know the original, it's a 'TA classic'. Can be found in TA Unite 3. If you want the full, I don't know, just ask or so. Dunno if it's cool cause the original is not released (yet).
Enough talk, grab it here:
Elude - Purgatory (Yarune Remix) www cut
Please leave comments, thx!
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| richg101 |
although i ve been mainly into prog recently...
a nice full sounding track with a nice drive from those drums.
its a bit textbook, but very pro sounding.
break is quite enjoyable...
overall the melody doesnt quite do it for me cos its a bit obvious in synth selection and overall composition.
maybe make parts a bit more minimal so the main fuller bits have more of an impact?
a well made piece. but doesnt have that 'wow' factor for a uplifting trance track...
rich:) |
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| sharvax |
Hi Yarune! Always enjoyed your tunes so I thought I'd give this one a listen. :)
Nice kick! That PWM-ish lead sounds just a tad bit too loud, could try cutting the lower frequencies a little more.. Bass could be a little fatter too! Everything's flowing along nicely otherwise. Breakdown sounds nice, but perhaps just a tad bit empty; and the climax could be a little more explosive too. :) The saw lead sounds very V-Station.. I don't know what it is but there's something that I don't like about it. :/ Try playing around with it!
Sorry if I sound a little harsh, don't mean to. :) The track is overall very nice and driving, mix is pretty tight too. I'm sure this will be awesome once you tweak it some more! Good luck! |
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| Jay M |
| quote: | Originally posted by sharvax
Hi Yarune! Always enjoyed your tunes so I thought I'd give this one a listen. :)
Nice kick! That PWM-ish lead sounds just a tad bit too loud, could try cutting the lower frequencies a little more.. Bass could be a little fatter too! Everything's flowing along nicely otherwise. Breakdown sounds nice, but perhaps just a tad bit empty; and the climax could be a little more explosive too. :) The saw lead sounds very V-Station.. I don't know what it is but there's something that I don't like about it. :/ Try playing around with it!
Sorry if I sound a little harsh, don't mean to. :) The track is overall very nice and driving, mix is pretty tight too. I'm sure this will be awesome once you tweak it some more! Good luck! |
No review's great, thanks! i'm looking for these kind of reviews. It's just the track that's old, learned so much since, i just dont feel like chaning al the synths in this one.
Only the bass is V-station, saw you mean is Korg polysix, sound is not the best I agree.
Thanks guys!! |
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| Drik |
Nice melodies in this one.
Melody wise this really kicks ass, it has a very evolving sound, very good on the ears and has lots of variation.
I don't know if this been mastered yet though, sounds a tad boxed, so I guess thats the thing that is missing now, proper eq:ing and mastering.
Good melodic synth piece :)
I noticed a small conflict in it btw, at 4:39 you have a minor and major chord at the same time. |
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| Jay M |
| quote: | Originally posted by Drik
Nice melodies in this one.
Melody wise this really kicks ass, it has a very evolving sound, very good on the ears and has lots of variation.
I don't know if this been mastered yet though, sounds a tad boxed, so I guess thats the thing that is missing now, proper eq:ing and mastering.
Good melodic synth piece :)
I noticed a small conflict in it btw, at 4:39 you have a minor and major chord at the same time. |
Melody is why I remixed it, it's just great stuff from the original.
Mastering is done by myself, but I'm no sound engineer so that has for sure room for improvement. With eq-ing I've had some problems with the two lead synths and the gated strings. Do you have any tips how I could improve the way they are eq'ed....?
It's a bit odd yes at 4:38-.. I'll have a look to it next time I edit the track (dunno if that's gonna happen tho).
Thanks Drik.
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| sooper |
Hey Jay,
There's this hollow sounded synth in the background.. it's ing cool! I love it.
Not sure if I like the synth for the main lead yet.. I need a few more listens. Right now it reminds me of early Perpetuous Dreamer stuff...
percs are top notch as always! :)
Tons of energy when you come out of the breakdown - that was well done.
I never heard the original but I enjoyed your remix - thanks for sharing,
Trev |
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| DJ Shibby |
Bring in that main melody in the first opening part a bit more craftily and it won't seem so out of place.
Good bridge and build.
Nice work. |
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| Terry Barker |
Yareune, good stuff, nice and analogue, percussion was great too...
Its wierd, i did a remix of this a while ago but started to redo it 2 nights ago... |
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| Jay M |
| quote: | Originally posted by Terry Barker
Yareune, good stuff, nice and analogue, percussion was great too...
Its wierd, i did a remix of this a while ago but started to redo it 2 nights ago... |
Yep I heard a sample of that a while ago. Don't forget to put it up here when you're done :)
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| Terry Barker |
Yeah was a few years now lol...
I will post full up nps...
Nice work Jay :) |
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| Pinokio |
Nice Remix Yarune
I like the Echo Feeling to give to the melody, Sounds very nice Overall =) |
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