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Language of the sun [Chillout/Ambient/downtempo]
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| mavve |
Heres a track ive been hamering on for a couple of hours. giv it a try and Rest your nerves =)
i feelt sad but happy when i made it, and i think that will show on the tune, dont shoot the msngr =) If your sad this will make you happy if your happy this will make you sad =)im not used to make Chillout.
would be very nice whit feedback=)
I need some feedback on how to improve =)
Chillout/Ambient/downtempo dont know what to call it
Link http://s34.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...8Z3H97OD4CS1CLG
Have a nice chill |
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| iloop |
| good stuff, really atmospheric and chill. The piano is very well done and when the rythm kicks in @ 2min its beautifull. Where did you get the vocal samples for this? sounds awesome, even with the hard compression feel. Very well done :) i love this song. |
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| DoubleK |
| Cool track! Reminds me of a rainy and stormy monday .. brr ... keep up the good work ;) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hello,
This sounds like early 90's New Age dude, above all that snare, is classic :).
The build up is a bit basic though, ahh when the vocals hit the track begins to sound really cool mate :).
In overall, this has potential for to be a great track, but I would work better the kick and snare beat, this style of New Age uses a lot of tiny claps with delay like Vangelis in chariots of fire, like clap, pa pa pa pa pa.
Overall is going really nice mate, just add more Back Up drums like clicksm and some low powerhits to give more intesity imo :).
Good work.
Kopi =o. |
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| mavve |
tnx for some great feedback. The Vocals are Studio vocals that i have cut in pices from one of my vocal trance tunes. | quote: | | DoubleK Cool track! Reminds me of a rainy and stormy monday .. brr ... keep up the good work |
heheh well it was a stromy day when i made it :stongue: .
| quote: | Hello,
This sounds like early 90's New Age dude, above all that snare, is classic .
The build up is a bit basic though, ahh when the vocals hit the track begins to sound really cool mate .
In overall, this has potential for to be a great track, but I would work better the kick and snare beat, this style of New Age uses a lot of tiny claps with delay like Vangelis in chariots of fire, like clap, pa pa pa pa pa.
Overall is going really nice mate, just add more Back Up drums like clicksm and some low powerhits to give more intesity imo .
Good work.
Kopi =o. |
So this is new age you say finally i know what it is hehehe - well it glads me that Kopi gave some feedback . afterall you are one of the best Producers of Ambient/chill aso . I will change the clap as you mentioned to vangelis style clap and add some powerhits , change the build up to some thing else and fix the drumwork.
Tnx for the feedback, It is very appriciated |
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| sooper |
Hey!
This is very soothing - I think you've done a great job.
All your layers fit very nicely together.
My only suggestions is that the volume swells in the choir pad are a bit distracting... they get soo quiet and then sooo loud.. almost made my seasick :toothless just kidding, but maybe you could tone that swell down a bit? just a suggestion!
A few more perc layers, and this is one solid chill out toon.
I'm looking forward to hearing more of your stuff - thanks for sharing,
Trev |
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| mavve |
| yes boss il take care of the waving pads. Anything else I should think about? |
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