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[Uplifting Trance] Terry Barker - AirSpace (Long Preview) *UPDATE*
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| Terry Barker |
Hi trancEaddict, just been cooking up a new tune lately as me and a friend are having a bit of a competition. I am still working on Say Goodbye but i just got carried away on this track. See what you think.
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| The Drow |
Nice powerful bassline.
The riff is nice.
Nice transition.
Good feeling and atmosphere.
I'm going into the break.
Nice transition again.
OMG nice choirs.
piano is good.
The lead is nice but you should add a secondery lead in it.
Some arp.
6.8/10
Omer. |
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| Terry Barker |
| cheers drow, much appreciated, more feedback is welcomed! |
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| Drik |
Im liking the intro you're going for. Lots of detail and much is happening. The melodies evolve which is nice :)
Nice turn at 1:00, keeps interest up. Evolving the melodies with piano, superb man :D
The break at 2 min is good. The buildup there is great. The subbass along with the other strings and melodies give you that "uplifting" feel.
At around 4 nearing 5 minutes the melodic line gets a tad repetetive, some variation here or an offbeat part might help?
Gets better when you introduce the piano. Still, I think some more variation here is needed :)
I get my interest back at 6:40 when it gets minimalistic, good stuff, tapping my feet here :D
Great stuff! |
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| Terry Barker |
| Cheers drik, im listenin to the full and im thinking exactly how u r about the main transition, i best get my toolkit back out. Thankx for listening, more feedback is appreciated! |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey Terry,
Weird I only seem to be able to download a 2 minutes sample? So I can not judge the track like Drik seems to can ;)
That build up seems to be fantastic. Would love to have heard more of the build up :) The break is nice as well, leadsynth is nice and once the beat is back the bass is really sexy. I am loving what I heard from this.
I agree with The Drow though, u need some kind of 2nd lead going in the leadsection to make this track extraordinary. But you are almost there, I love what I am hearing so far :)
Cheers!
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| Terry Barker |
Sorry guys, iv uploaded a 2min sample for now because im updating atm... the update is now finished and i will be uploading a larger sample tonight if i get time! :)
Linkmage i will review if i get time tonite mate ;) |
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| Terry Barker |
| Update Time, I have altered the second part of the riff, download the original link at the top... |
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| The Drow |
I can't tell the differenece.
Maybe I'm just too tired now.
Omer |
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| JoeyEnv |
Well, I didnt hear the first one so I cant judge the difference but I love this man. up from me.  ;) |
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| Terry Barker |
hehe cool, drow basically i have taken advise form drik and made the main melody off beat...
glad you like it joeyenv, more feedback appreciated. |
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