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Richard Gale **moving melodic Trancer**- work in progress..
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| richg101 |
here is my newest track of my own that ive been playing with for the odd five mins here and there for quite a while.
very bare and more of a concept piece than a finished article.
some of my 80's movie influences have gone into the melody i think and some of my style from about a year ago.. this is a lot more uplifting than my usual stuff but still has a sad side to it..
richard gale - electro genius(rough play around)
as always i love to hear your comments whether you like/dislike and why:)
enjoy...
rich:) |
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| RickyM |
Hey Rich
I found that the song took a while to get going..but once you bring in that melody it starts to sound very nice. I think you need more percussion though, to make things a bit fuller sounding. I know you where going for the electro sound with the bassline, but perhaps a sub bass as well would fatten things up, and also maybe make the buzzy bassline sharper and louder.
But definitely got something here mate, the melody is very nice and atmospheric, the song progresses nicely, I wasn't bored the whole time listening :). Nice fusion of genres, just get more percs in to her! |
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| richg101 |
cheers ricky my friend:)
its still very empty i know.. it needs loads more percs and a nice long note bassline to give it more grunt i know.
these are just the comments im looking for, so i carry on working on the tune in the right direction.
cheers mate:)
any more opinions?. |
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| Takkra |
hehe I like the starting groove :p
although the hihats sound a bit too dry.. but I can live with that;)
may I also suggest a bit more bassfrequencies in the bassline :) or a really small bit of distortion.. or both :D:p
the pads string kinda synth (:p) is nice as well as the filtered melody. in the break before you kick in, I think the snare's are too dry, just add a bit of reverb :) ( I have no idea actually maybe this shouldnt be done at all, but thats what I would do:p im just a rookie at producing :p) It's really nice listening trance rich, but you said a while ago you were going for the more clubby stuff.. in that case it misses drive.
holy sh!t the part at 7:24 where the kick comes back sound soo lovely.. I really like it somehow.. though its not the main part of the track ;) definitly dont touch that part man!
nice job on this one :) im looking forward to your progress
(lol look at all the smileys :p) |
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| djlogik |
| I feel it does take too long to build up and you do need more percs obviously, but this track has some good potential. The bass sounds almost Albino-ish...add a sub-bass and it'll really put some more drive into the tune. Give the hihats some more reverb or eq them differently maybe? Snare is a little too boring also. Can't wait to hear the finished product it'll definitely sound great. You're making a lot of progress from the first track that I heard from you. Keep up the good work bro :) |
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| richg101 |
hey takkra.
cheers for the review mate. glad there was a lot that you liked. im gonna definately bass it up more with an acompanying sub bassline.
i have played with reverb on the snares but i gotto agree i like them quite dry. the somehow sound nice a hard without too much verbin..
i know what you mean about the 7;24 part. that staying i think.
cheers buddy:)
mr logic..
thanks also for your words:)
build will have more in it soon so thatll be sorted. sub bass is on the christmas list of this track i think as i said above:)
other points are also noted! and im glad you look forward to the finished article.
thanks mate:) |
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| richg101 |
is it not to peoples liking? any feedback?
rich:) |
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