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::Uplifting Trance:: Altuna - Shella (original mix) 128kbps (pg. 2)
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| alanzo |
Starts out nice... another hard trance?
Clap is too loud and/or needs to be EQed to get rid of muddyness
bass is pretty nice..
that clap sounds horrid by this point and is annoying... (1:20)
I heard some distortion in that kick fill
main melody isn't too bad.. i almost like it ;)
comes in hard.. but would be nice if the hats where louder when the kick comes in...
Altuna was better :p |
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| Aquarian |
| quote: | Originally posted by technoman
Hey Aquarian,
I see you from Laval.
Im from Ile perrot.Are there a lot of montreal guys here?
Do you have anything that you produced that i can take a listen to? |
Yeah - scroll down the list, there's a forum just for montreal. ;) |
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| Kris Xperiment |
| quote: | Originally posted by Aquarian
As far as I know it's just called a drumroll and you achieve it with a volume slide. :wtf: |
lol, i love that face at the end gives humor.
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Good-----------------------------------------------------------------
Excellent percussion
Fast, precise bass, Song arrangement is very orerly
Main Highhat (Cliche, but sounds good)
Atmosphere (Tons of it) Little melodic touches
Bass change is nice and aesthetic.
Blending of strings is nice.
Excellent vocals.
Massive melody (I've heard that somewhere before. lol, maybe George Hales)
Piano sounds nice and classic (In a trance standard nowadays kind of way)
At 5:00 Excellent synth **may I ask what that is?
6:00 Beautiful way to set the stage for a final build up.
Bad----------------------------------------------------------------
Clap's too loud
Kick not strong enough
Break comes in a bit too early I think (Or maybe its just a pre-break at around 2 minutes)
KICK NEEDS StRONGER KICK! lol.
Sounds Mono at times
The Verdict
It has its amazing euphoric moments and its a track with great potential. but it's the small details that rob it from all it's glory.
Adding a stereo enhancer to certain synth channels can fix the sounding mono at times. and the kick needs to stand out a bit more. The clap sounds fine but volume can easily be turned down just about this much (-)
Overall its a a well produced track.
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| marcusk |
Nice start. But like the other comments, the clap is too loud.
Good drive. Smooth break. Man, I'm really liking the quality of this. Sounds really pro.
Listening again, couldn't pick on anything more the first round.
About the break, build up is good, but I would've liked it to be a little more build up.
Sweet, nice job. |
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| DJ Dinz |
Hi Guys!
Thank you really Thank you for listening!
n also the comment :) :)
I agree the clap is too loud.. n some panning needed :):)
I will fix it soon.. pls gimme a chance for the next version :haha: :haha:
@Kris Xperiment: That is kinda what u call "Stab" i reckon hehe
PS: is this melody use before? hehe i know.. the lead is kinda george hales-phoenix, icone-sintra ..n lots of other trance style :P
but i didnt copy them.. and i believe i have the different key n bassline :D :D
Cheers Guys! |
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| DJ Dinz |
| quote: | Originally posted by ********
ps if anyone knows the club hit I am talking about.. dooh dooh doooh --- doooh doooh doooh
EDIT:
Just checked...
it is in the ferry video from dance acadamy.. same melody or am I mistaken?
www.danceacademy.co.uk/content/videos/ferry.wmv |
Hi Ashley.. it is "coldplay - Speed of sound (??remix)"
Its hot in my country too..
hehe
cheers m8! |
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| DJ Dinz |
Hi Guys
Just Got M-Audio Audiophile 192 & throw my Audigy in a rubbish bin, n i think this time i do better on the mixdown...
This my 2nd attempt on this track.. hehe tell me what u think.. i feel that the track still lack of something.. hehe
UPDATE VERSION CLICK HERE
Cheers! |
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| staticblue |
it's very good (great kick and drive) until the offbeat subbass comes in. I think it could be improved a tad (different pattern ?) i was also expecting a fatter lead, this one sounds too cheapish IMO :)
structure of the track and mixing are pretty good though, and good drive in it. definitly your best track uptill now ! |
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| DjDefected |
| Hey altuna, nice track again. The only thing is I thought the intro sounded busy, but that might jsut be me. really liked the meldoy and the lead definitly made me want to get out of my chair and dance. |
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| djrenco |
hey mate.. sounds very nice:) a little oververbed i think.. this could be a live rip of a set man;) anyway good job so far
cheers
renco |
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| Lalin |
I listened to the updated version. Sweet track, it sounds good. The drive is good, I like it...
Other elements are pretty standard, now is the time to inject some of your own signture sounds into this production and make it different.
Lalin |
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| DJ Dinz |
| quote: | Originally posted by Lalin
now is the time to inject some of your own signture sounds into this production and make it different.
Lalin |
Yeah.. Im figuring out.. what should i doooo... LOL im lost
btw thnx for others comments up there...
CHEERS! |
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