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Trance track, with a deep bassdrum, (kinda psy)
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| feeltheflow |
constructivelly speaking and no offense intended-
u should do somethin about those drums bro |
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| Frost-RAVEN |
| what's wrong with them? You are being kinda vague. |
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| dj_kane |
| have you another link mate? that one wont work on my comp. cheers. |
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| dj_kane |
very dark tech trance.
nice fx
drums arent bad could probably use a compressor on them to beef them up more.
becomes a bit repetitive. dont no what style you are into so maybe this style is meant to sound like this.
nicely lead out track though. like that part around 3:50.
good to hear something different though |
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| cybernetica |
Damn, what a sweet ride! Respect for another class-A psy tune.
but now ... commenting as I listen.
The percs in the beginning are kinda thin. I'd wish to hear some better (fuller) perc sounds.
The kick-bass combo is interesting. The kick has a nice thump to it, and the bass is pretty warm, which is a good sign.
However I think the lowest frequencies are a little too heavy. Somehow they get distracting, might just be my speakers but it seems like they are a little overwhelming the rest.
The FX are extremely nice and make good use of the stereo spectrum, like they should be in a good Psy tune. Though, like it has been mentioned, some compression on some of them could help you make them stand out a little more. But dont overcompress your tune, rather leave it how it is :)
3:49 - here the ownage really begins! Somehow this lead really really manages to "spin" something in my head. I dont know how to describe it, but its like a good music indicator. There is not much stuff my detector responds to, so :D ... It doesnt get boring at all, even though you stick to it quite long. Sweet pads in the background, I like the darker touch to them a lot.
Interesting to see you made a more hypnotic track this time seeming more like a unity.. and I really think it works much better for me personally.
About the cons: Like mentioned, some of the sounds could maybe sound a little richer and sharper - compression? ... the percussion is not really that interesting. I think you can make it more driving. Maybe you should also consider to switch some of the sounds. And then the lowest frequencies are too heavy (at least my impression) - a little turning down should do it.
w00t, this track made me bang my head :D ... This is probably my personal favorite of you. I'd say you should fix the little flaws and send this out!
9/10 |
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| Frost-RAVEN |
| Thanks guys, My big problem is my speakers arent monitors. In fact this was writen on iMac speakers. if you dont know what that is, they are small speakers with no bass at all. If I got a chance to mix on high end speakers I could probably fix the problems. It's still good you pointed them out, cause now when ever I get a chance, I can clean things up. |
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| feeltheflow |
do u not have any headphones?
the system shouldnt matter as long as its consistent and ur aware of how it will sound once you render it..
i do all my productions on laptop speakers because im used to them and i have no monitors |
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| dj_kane |
| yea mate you must have headphones. i use studio speakers when producing but when i mix it down and master it i use headphones so i can heaar the sounds more clearly. |
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