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break-down/build-up from my new song idea "move"
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| Since Forever |
Check this out, keep in mind I have no percs yet and only a bass drum. Before I keep going in this exact direction tell me your thoughts please. I have a few things Im already thinking of changing but I may just be to critical...
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| Since Forever |
| 19 views and no replies? Whats the deal does it suck that bad? I thought I was on to a pretty bangin track........ haha, I hope you all didnt think I really ment JUST a bass drum... |
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| websley |
Dunno, track's buildup isn't really there yet... The sound that comes in @ 0:55 sounds not a bit, but VERY cheesy. That background synth there has to stay, though. Maybe you'd do good to change the "0:55-sound" into a supersaw lateron.
Percs are teh hardest, so you're not even halfway... Good luck!;)
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| Since Forever |
| thanks... thats exactly the type of stuff I needed to hear. So you think its just the sound i used or the whole melody that comes in at 55 thats cheesy? |
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| websley |
| quote: | Originally posted by Since Forever
thanks... thats exactly the type of stuff I needed to hear. So you think its just the sound i used or the whole melody that comes in at 55 thats cheesy? |
It's the sound actually. The melody maybe could use a harmonic twist or something, but that sound is the main reason it's cheesy. |
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| Since Forever |
| thanks for the help .... I've got a few things in the works for it now.. |
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