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ROMi - Panoramic (updated clip)
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| Four_On_Four-er |
Beautiful intro...
I can't really complain about the intro other than I think it is a tad long. It has an excellent vibe that continues into the trance beat. Maybe you'd want to hold off on those melodies and build up to them more from a deeper trance beat. Just a thought, but I'm not at your skill level IMO. |
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| Romi |
| Thx for the comment Four_On_Four-er. Forgot to say the clip starts with the break. |
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| websley |
Hello Romi,
This is my kind of Trance and it still doesn't loose it's grip, the "sunset"-Trance, I mean by that:D
Nice atmos U created, but I really need a break/build-up in this one cause you surprised me with the ending. Means the song structure could be a lot better. (I guess you probably are working on that at the moment)
Rhythm is nicely done, only the snare afterbeat seems to be a bit in the thin side. (by that, I mean it sounds like a hiss-sound)
Hope you'll be working on this one, and check my new one if you like.
-weBs;) |
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| azndragon0613 |
Hey Romi,
Nice atmosphere to start out the song. The bassline sounds to come in abruptly...maybe add some effects or a swoosh. The loop gets old after some time, but I like the surreal feel to the song.
Nice work |
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| Romi |
| Thx for the suggestions guys. And websley, as i said in my begintopic, it's just a portion of the break and a part of the climax for now, so yes, the structure is gonna be a lot more different, still working on the build-up and other parts. I have checked out your track websley, nice one. |
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| Stino |
| great atmosphere and melody, but i feel the bass is a bit to loud and that estuera/jonas steur typa synth is a bit over used, but very cool work so far, the kick/bass/percussion combo works awesome. |
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| richg101 |
hi ron:)
by the way cheers for the review of my track..
onto panoramic..
i love the 'vangelis' sound you use. its really 80's and lush sounding. bass is nice. it sounds dirty! and complements your clean style.
i have very high hopes for this. i think this is one of my favourites of yours.
please please please! change some of the percs you use on this. for some unusual sounds. i think the percs are a bit standard and the melodies are far from standard.. i mean you could add like a ring modulator effect to the clap for example and end up with a wicked sound that would add to the unusal spacy melodies your using..?
when its done please can i have a 320k because i really like this..:)
rich:) |
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| RickyM |
Hey Romi
Cool track you got here indeed, though I feel the break at the start is a little thin, those strings are all very 'high'sounding, I would throw in a big low string to complement them. The bass and kick are very well done though, very driving. Keep it up! |
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| b i n k u n |
nice one Romi. :)
can't comment too much on the production level as i'm on computer speakers now, but i like the feel of this track. i think the break (which i presume is the beginning intro of your sample) could do with some more ambient pads or effects in the background tho, sounds a bit thin at the moment.
but melody-wise, it's real nice to listen to. keep it up man. |
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| Nemesis44 |
Very nice,
Just been working on one of my own dark and moody tracks and ears were getting tired. This was a nice break and very uplifting. thanks for sharing it.
Keep up the good work
Cheers
Nem |
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