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[ darktrance twist :p ] Takkra - Unnamed 192kb/s 7:05 Full!
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| Takkra |
joohoo. no school today :p so I made a new track from a project I had lying around for a couple of weeks.. :) hope you guys enjoy !
would love some pointers!
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| Four_On_Four-er |
Hmmm... 10 megs...
Very freaky digital bassline. Flanger, phaser, or something is making it drowned out the kick just a tad (could also be this cheapo headphones I"m using at the moment).
Very interesting free-style breakdowns... percussion havens... that snare-Tom and congo thingie is becomming a tad repetitive.
I think you are on to something. It sounds quite empty at times, and too digital. It is really a bit long for the elements it carries.
I LOVE the filtered in saw-ish sound at the 4:00 breakdown. However, I think it could leave a much louder EXPLOSION into the trance beat. Just it's kinda style, IMO.
I like how this track is all layered... One problem I believe is that the kick doesn't seem to properly fit after awhile. |
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| The Drow |
Nice toms.
The saw is too phasered, It's anoyying.
Nice streached hihat.
meh I'll listen later again. I'm too tired.
I don't feel the track. But you have something.
Try add a off-sync bassline (arcadia style thingy, ozgur can remix).
Omer. |
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| Takkra |
hehe nice to see different opinions :)
yea I wasnt all that happy about the ph4z0r thing.. but I like the effect.. ill turn it down to see how it sounds
thanks for reviewing.. helpfull ;) |
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| captaincrunch |
| You have a good sound. I noticed; 1:40 beat change- percussion overides the change. 3:00 ish hats don't match the bells lead, it clashes. Good track though. I'll listen to it again. |
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| Takkra |
hmm, I think the bell lead is the nonfat saws right? I had the hihat running so you'd get a smoother transition to the break :)..
but ill try some different hihats;) hehe
you know I was really puzzled a while with the percs like you said, but ive noticed you can place the kick at different places in one "perc bar" you can put it in the first, but also in the second.. weird:o! |
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| Rayan |
I hear that you are pretty new in this stuff. So I will just say that it sound "okey!"
but if I would put my finger one something, would it be the way the whole thing its drowning in to the see. Sounds are disappering because you use to much volume on every channal. so the sounds dont get any space to breath inn. Nice perch btw!
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