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[First attempt at Psy] Alpha - Untitled (Sample)
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| [Alpha]Dave |
Hello all,
This is a sample of my first attempt at making psy. Is it worth continueing at? Take a listen and tell me what you think! :)
I started working on it a couple of hours ago..
Alpha - Untitled (Sample)
Cheers!
/David |
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| Sh!fty |
sounds really promissing :crazy: :crazy:
as a true beatwhore I really like this ^^ |
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| Axolotyl |
Sounds good for a couple of hours worth of work
The fx are the start are pretty nuts!
Don't suppose you want to share that lead synth patch by any chance? Sounds wicked dude ;) |
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| Four_On_Four-er |
Sure does sound awesome...
The introduction is the best part IMO.
MY only complaints:
DEEPER BASS... The other elements need to be seperated better... they all seem to hit the mid-trance frequencies pretty hard. The bass itself would do the track good to be more down there, as opposed to hanging with other things. |
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| snooky |
mate this is hot psy! hi hat could be a fraction lower. but thats it nice one. vocal sample got me strait away. whana here more!
ps. hav a ganders at my not so good tune @
http://trance-in-ur-head.moonfruit.com/
thanx. snooky |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Bleh, soundclick mp3player ftl.
I like the intro best.
When the beat comes in, though, there's something wrong with the bass. I want to say it sounds a bit preset-ishplay around with your oscillators, distortion, cutoff and compression to make the sound a bit deeper, and maybe more grumbly.
Good luck, and keep it up. Can't wait to see where this goes. |
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| greenskydj |
| It sounds good. Bring us 6 minutes worth! |
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| Frost-RAVEN |
If you just bring the bass an octave lower, and hicut it a bit, it be better. much better. I like it, but that bassline is more like a fast synthline then a bassline.
Once you get the bass in the spot of bass, you'll be in be much closer to home/. |
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| cybernetica |
commenting as I listen...
Great FX and ambience! Great way to introduce a Psy tune.
That sharp lead sound is just awesome. Maybe a little more delay on it.
Like people mentioned, the bass is really too high, and I agree with tuning it one octave down, thereby you will be able to remove the interferences.
I'm a little unsure about the kick, but it might sound better if you got the bass right ;)
Nice drive and percs then! This could get a really wicked Psy tune. Considering this is your first Psy attempt, it sounds awesome.
Good job, keep it up! |
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| The Drow |
Nice intro.
Actaully it has really nice atmosphere.
The bass sounds bad.
The track is too loud, I had to turn down the volume on my speakers.
I like the gated vocals.
The intro is good.
The rest nah.
But I won't give you a grade since it's your first time.
learn from cybernetika :)
Omer |
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| [Alpha]Dave |
Thx alot guys!! I totally agree with the bass! Cause I made this during the night when I was working in my headphones, where the bass sonded pretty phat. But when I played the track in my studiomonitors in the morning, the bass sounded thin as hell :)
I willl take all your comments so far in concidiration, thx alot guys! :)
/David |
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