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Breakbeat, One of my frist breaks.
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Frost-RAVEN
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...fm?bandID=87574

"Rockbiter"

I was goin for something that is dance-ish, but also, well I don't know...Enjoy!
Dirty Ice
WHo could dance to this?
Who could listen to this?
They all suck!
It sounds like a bunch of loops that are just thrown together.
Sorry just very honest.
Frost-RAVEN
Too much for you? Maybe it's just a tad bit too hardcore, but come on, there is nothing of merit at all?

Well, then what do you suggest I do?
cracka_DJ <>
Nice industrial break once it gets going. I like the bassline that comes in too and the progression around 2:35

Don't listen to the above poster... he's probably never opened his mind to anything other than pop-trance :P

This is obviously worth listening to... and the rockbiter idea is really original, good job.

if I were to change anything it'd be the kick drum... but at the same time it sounds good after the intro so meh.... maybe just turn it down a little or put a compressor on it.



P.S. I'm on soundclick too: soundclick.com/djcracka

My new songs are: Moment of Clarity, Clear water (which is a remix of moment of clarity), Attack!, and cheap trick.

I'd love any comments on those if you feel like listening to them.
Frost-RAVEN
Hey thanks man, Ill try to make myself remeber to check out those tracks.
cybernetica
Raw sounds here. Yep. Maybe getting a little repetitive in the long run...

I admit I'm not 100% sure about it. I dont really get the groove here.

Though some extremely nice synth programming. Your lead sounds are awesome as always. Very Goa'ish, doesnt IMO really fit with the rest of the tune, I would rather see them together with a nice 4/4 beat. Could get really trippy.

Otherwise, I wouldnt really say you should throw away the break beat, but you should work on the percussion sounds and their interchange. The beat could also have more groove or drive. The bass however is nice :)

Keep it up! :)
Frost-RAVEN
Thanks for the review. I have got really attached to this piece for some reason. I chaging it up a bit, but not much, just fixin some clipping issues, and added more samples (...a rock biter!?!) yeah that one.


:nervous: I just like that smilie.
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