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[Prog/Trance] William Vance - untitled [SAMPLE 128 KBPS]
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| Bassaka |
I've been producing alot lately, and this odd, experimental gritty prog trance situation came about. I definately don't want to ruin the song, and would really appreciate some comments, or thoughts about this.
linkage - <--thats the link :)
Thanks,
William |
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| greenskydj |
| I like it alot. You get a lot of bass out of that saw/303 in the beginning. how? may I ask.l exactly the thing I was in the mood for. I like the two melody changes. they come in so perfectly like they're not going to make it. I like the distortion at the end too- Keep it. |
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| Bassaka |
| Thanks for your reply, i'll keep the bass a secret :) |
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| S-Tune |
To be honest i´m not a big fan of the bass, imo its sound is too monotone and at the bass change @1:30 it would be better to play it an octave higher.
I think, the lead could have more reverb...
Just my thoughts...
P.S.: Maybe you like to criticize/review my new track - http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=311183 |
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| david.michael |
Mr. Vance, you have a very unique style! This track is sounding very cool so far, definitely finish it!
Review:
I like the no-bs start. Gets right into things.
I really like the snare roll but it's used way too often. The first time it was way cool. After that it gets annoying. I would only use it the first time, and maybe once more during the track.
Bassline is decent in the beginning. Nice reverb on this!
A little too much dropping the kick in the beginning, I think. Wanna keep that dancefloor momentum going! At 34 seconds you think something's going to happen..... and then it just continues. Kinda misleading and disappointing.
1:02 - Whoa, that dropping synth and the bass is sweet! Bassline comes back in.... really like this part! Cool melody filters in.
1:29 - wow! That totally threw me off guard! Bassline drops an octave or so... that sounds sweet!!
1:43 - new melody comes in, sounds very nice.
2:02 - filtering up the bassline quickly sounds very cool here.
2:17 - LOVE THIS LEAD! It's very Commodore 64, hehe... I love it.
Basically, this track to me sounds like a trance track that's constantly thinking about turning into a goa/psy song but doesn't quite get there (and that's not necessarily a bad thing), and then turns a bit 8-bit Commodore at the end (which is a compliment from me, lol)
Really digging this tune, finish it up! Just be careful with the melodies because you're starting to border on cheese with them. Great job! |
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| pho mo |
That bass is excellent from the start, good vibe you've got going. The arrangement seems a little random, but that can be fixed with some nice transitionaly fx and . You get some really deep freqs from that bass but I think it loses power when you drop the bass an octave.
The hat on its own at 0:14 sounds a bit weak, maybe cook it up a little or layer something else on top.
The pitch dropping sounds coming in at 1:02 give the tune a great dark feel, which is kind of undone when the melody kicks in around 1:43 which is more happy. Try to stay focussed and keep the attitude up! |
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| hardbeats100 |
this is the closest thing to what i like i've herd in the forums so far, more hard thant the rest. well done dude. good work.
ps i reveiw u. now you reveiw me@
http://hardbeats100.moonfruit.com
thanx..... |
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| richg101 |
sounds great!
good drive from some subtle and nice percs and that bassline is really driving. very rave esq!
1;20 - melody is not great imo. also not fond on the synth.
1;48 - melody nice but doesnt go with bassline i think.. i wish it did because it sounds nice. have a listen and try and see what i mean..
play around cos this has some great potential here.
nice clean production too.
rich:) |
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| david.michael |
| quote: | Originally posted by Bassaka
I did some major updates. Enjoy!
linky link link
William |
You linked to the wrong song, bro :) |
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| Rayan |
hehe..
Listening:
dont like the snare. sorry! Or maybe the whole perc. but thats just me :)
the bass is cool!
01:07 ; cool! but you could have done some more there ;)
01:30 ; the lead is alittle "not" me :) hehe! and the bass there goes crazy! thats sounds cool!
02:04 ; hehe. high cut filter ;) thats cool! and nice lead that comes inn.
Overall; a good production. But, It could have needed some more work! :) but thats just me!
Keep it up. You got some talents! |
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