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First track ever!![TRANCE/HARD TRANCE]Accidental Fate [192 kbps Full Track]
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| technoman |
Hi Everyone,
Here is my very first track.Im really excited about it.
Its really cool when you hear it playing in winamp after you finished.
Anyhow this is a trance/with a touch of hard trance i guess.
I know nothing about music theory etc etc.
Please let me know what missing from it/how to make it sound better.
Youll notice that i dont have any build ups after the break.
How do i make build ups and how do i like introduce a break.
Enjoy.
ACCIDENTAL FATE |
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| Leighton_Tyler |
| Just had a listen. Not too bad, given its ur very first song. I liked the sounds u had going. Overall its a bit simplistic and lacks some variety both percussively and in melody, but that's pretty much a given when people start out. It takes time to learn how to construct a solid tune. Just takes alot of practice and studying songs of pro's for ideas on how things come together. I think the song deffinately could use a bassline of some sort :) That would be a good starting point. |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by Leighton_Tyler
Just had a listen. Not too bad, given its ur very first song. I liked the sounds u had going. Overall its a bit simplistic and lacks some variety both percussively and in melody, but that's pretty much a given when people start out. It takes time to learn how to construct a solid tune. Just takes alot of practice and studying songs of pro's for ideas on how things come together. I think the song deffinately could use a bassline of some sort :) That would be a good starting point. |
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Kopi =o. |
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| dj justin v |
this is my first post in ta , this song is no good but for your first its nb . my first song was horrrrable worse then that the
only thing u can do is keep it up... cheers |
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| Bassaka |
| quote: | Originally posted by Leighton_Tyler
Just had a listen. Not too bad, given its ur very first song. I liked the sounds u had going. Overall its a bit simplistic and lacks some variety both percussively and in melody, but that's pretty much a given when people start out. It takes time to learn how to construct a solid tune. Just takes alot of practice and studying songs of pro's for ideas on how things come together. I think the song deffinately could use a bassline of some sort :) That would be a good starting point. |
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William |
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| djlogik |
| I'd have to agree with everyone else. A little too simplistic for not bad for your first track. |
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