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| dr3amz |
thought i'd share this with you all :) still a lot to do, the mid sections are there atm just to give me an idea of where to go, but will be modified drastically, but still I would really love some feedback on this as it is :D
http://homepages.nildram.co.uk/~dr3...owwearefree.mp3 |
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| Illumin |
listening to it right now.......wow.....can't really find anything to pick apart....mixdown is great. very laid back.
if anything i would say do some kind of lead part with that whiny, light, pluck sound in the break.
other than that...wow again...i like it. |
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| dr3amz |
| thanks for the feedback il - anyone else? :D |
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| mickb1 |
yes nice mellow tune, i like it. love the bass
im sure you could refine it more, but it sounds ok as it is.. |
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| dr3amz |
| well needs a lot of work still, the parts after the chorus's are just temporary, the breakdown will stay but be worked on more tho. :D |
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| Gladius |
| nice melody, easy listening stuff =). |
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| Kris Xperiment |
Great atmosphere carries this track along, sounds and pads give it a walking progressively sound. Wow, the melody is one of kind. You have to finish this. Although the bass seems static and has that basic 4- beat it kind of compliments the melody. Is there anyway to innovate with that bass? Perhaps give it a nice slightly distored bass, just a suggestion.
Excellent structure. Put everything in its place and you have a good trance track :) :) |
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| dr3amz |
| glad you like it :) the 4/4 bass will be changed on the intro part (just some variation etc) if you notice it gets killed at the 2nd chorus for something a bit more trancey :) |
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| *InVeRs3* |
| All I can Say is :eek: |
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| Since Forever |
| I know this may seem like a weird way to judge tracks.... but I tend to like tracks I can imagine driving to or playing a racing game to and I could picture myself playing tokyo racer with this in the background. In other words, cool stuff so far. |
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| dr3amz |
i know what you mean :)
i used to play International Karate + on the C64 to Kate Bush - Running up that hill, for hours :-) |
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