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[Chilled Trance] Planisphere - Nye (Damian Prus Remix)
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| [-dp-Sensuerea] |
Hello!
Here's a 3 minute sample of some chilled-progressive trance from me. Just give it a try & write what you think about it:D
*UPDATE*
Finished version. Feedback would be really appreciated!
Here's link to updated version:
[[ LINK REMOVED ]]
Have a nice day,
Damian;) ;) ;) :D |
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| The Drow |
Nice breaks remix.
I think you should use a synth for the original melody.
The bass is really nice.
You've added too much crashes.
imo it should have stayed as only breaks.
This doesn't top the original.
Decent 6.5/10
Omer. |
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| Romi |
| Great stuf. Very good sounds and good structure. I love everything, it's very dreamy and relaxing. Keep up the good work. I usually don't give ratings, but in this case i would say definatly an 8,5/10:) . |
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| [-dp-Sensuerea] |
Thanks for feedback! :D
@ Romi: I'm glad you liked it! ;)
@ The Drow: Dunno if it top the original, or not because i never heard the original version :) I just want to make some relaxing chilled trance and i found midi with this awesome melody :D Anyway, thanks for comment!
Have a nice day,
Damian |
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| The Drow |
| quote: | Originally posted by [-dp-Sensuerea]
@ The Drow: Dunno if it top the original, or not because i never heard the original version :) I just want to make some relaxing chilled trance and i found midi with this awesome melody :D Anyway, thanks for comment!
Have a nice day,
Damian |
The original is wayyy over this remix.
The main melody shouldn't be a piano, really, it just doesn't fit.
Ditch the delay too.
Omer. |
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| [-dp-Sensuerea] |
| quote: | Originally posted by The Drow
The original is wayyy over this remix.
The main melody shouldn't be a piano, really, it just doesn't fit.
Ditch the delay too.
Omer. |
This is not supposed to be a copy of Planisphere song. This is my version of it, my soul inside. I think, that piano fit perfectly to the melody. I really like it. My point is - remixes of songs are not copies of them, they are completly diffrent interpretations. So, original synth fits good to melody? Ok, but i just want to make something with my taste. Too bad, you didn't liked it.
And have a nice day,
Damian
Anyone else want give me some feedback? As unexperienced producer, i need it :) |
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| [-dp-Sensuerea] |
No? :confused:
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| mrlachatte |
I love when the percs come in at 0:30, nice basses later, too. Good driving kick around 1:35, it feels like this track is going somewhere. Around 3:40 the track is feeling a little bit stale, it's all the same melody and bass that I've been hearing for a while now. Nice strings again around 4:45, that's about it!
Overall, pretty good track, nice and dreamy and relaxed. It's just a bit too long for too little variety. |
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