|
New Track Dj L&l Opinion & Remix Ddl
|
View this Thread in Original format
| marco.V |
Hey there
Dj L&L - Made my Day (Original Mix)
Thats a new track from me sure its not as good as some of your tracks but the melody is damn f*cking great (to me)
Free for remix
Give your opinion (mantis,lightwork,pjotrG,dave b etc... :))
Thx for your time
Enjoy!
Right Click Save as http://perso.wanadoo.fr/famille600w/mademyday.mp3 |
|
|
| marco.V |
| btw post reply for details cuz i dont know how to use the pm :) |
|
|
| Lightworks |
hey dl'ing it now my friend ;)
you have any files (midi or something) to remix it?
Take care! Wim @LW |
|
|
| marco.V |
| ya man fuity loops! lol ill upload it tomorrow |
|
|
| Pjotr G |
- Downloading
- Listening
To go with the strings and melody, you should pitch your bassline a couple of tones down, I believe 5 semitones?
Your mix sounds a bit empty....maybe some more drums (there's more out there than a shaker and 2 hihats and clap) and a can of delay and reverb (specially reverb) on....pretty much everything except drums (only a little bit on drums).
Also you keep your bassline at one tone, it may sound more matural if you let it go with the strings.
I dunno...it just sounds a bit dry and empty. |
|
|
| Lightworks |
hey there buddy ;)
i checked the track and i believe most what pjotr said was true... you could add some more things like a driving bass or one that sounds more distinctive and some more drums.
the melody is nice though, it catches your ear immediately :)
there's just a little work to do on the percussion and bass, i think the rest is ok.
Post the flp file, so that i can start remixing ;)
Take care, Wim @ LW |
|
|
| marco.V |
hey
thank you pjotr and lw for your time sure its a bit empty but i dont like building the drums and the bass so....
ill try to make it better with your advice thx it is my first song.
Ill post the flp file when my f*cking sever will work.
Cya |
|
|
| mantisnl |
hey.. sorry I`m late hehe...
My opinion:
-very very nice! u r good.. but the finish isn`t everything is good.. but most things r 2 loud.. or to soft.. and the build up isn`t that perfect.. sometimes you`ve used the wrong samples (I think hehe..)
but if that was good.. it would be perfect!
I`ll make a remix :D
hope I`ll be finished soon :toothless
greetz,
DJ Mantis |
|
|
| marco.V |
Yo mantis thx for your opinion i was a bit sad with the other replies but yours making me happy enough to follow and to rearrange it so that it is perfect.
Thx man
Cant wait till u remix it |
|
|
| Lightworks |
hey marco v ;)
don't let any people telling you what's right or wrong with your track discourage you... I've been there too, you know.
The first words about a track i made on this forum was "first i have to say what a mix..." - a disgruntled tranceaddict maybe?? i'm not gonna call his name though :)
but there you have it... it was a track alot of people have loved and listened too over quite some time and then i posted it here to see what real tranceaddicts thought of it - quite depressing :(
but yet, you'l learn from those words (well not exactly those, but...) and get better and better... you'll see ;)
keep it up! you definately got a nice taste of melody there :)
Cheers, Wim @ LW |
|
|
| marco.V |
thank you man
u know im doing trax since a long time like 3years but it was always i really was happy to say this track is mine :)
Sure what ur telling is to make me come better and im pleased of that
im gonna redo this track with everybodies opinion and with the remix u gonna make :)
thx |
|
|
|
|
