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[Techno] Jay Rico - Kindness
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| VictorCharlie |
Yo
This time I created a percussive technotrack, named Kindness...
I'm looking for your critics so I would be very grateful if some people would rate it...
Thanks
Jay Rico - Kindness |
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| Mr Rogers |
| wanting here some techno on TA finally but my comp at work is giving me codec problems. i'll check it out when i get home for sure! |
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| linkmage |
man,that is great work...:) but I see there some element(like loops) or something,if thats true,try to slice it up and create your own variation..Your volume level is to small....
8.5/10 |
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| Mr Rogers |
excellent productions skillz!
the kick is really outdated though, and that "what the you look'n at" sounds like ^%$#. elements in the song is really good, your def experienced. To me the song just doesn't really go anywhere for me though.
cool track for sure! |
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| VictorCharlie |
| Thank you thank you |
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| Axolotyl |
I'm getting some huge bass and some very thin highs. You NEED to add some mids to this track.. unless thats how your wanting it to sound... dont know much about techno production to be honest.
Composition is very nice. Really getting off on the purcussion... its quite solid and works well with the bass. you lookin at sample is a overused a tad perhaps, but its a got a good hearty theme to it ;)
Was kind of wanting a really left field change somewhere along the line. I know a lot of techno just pounds along with a solid groove, but the tracks that really excite me are the ones with the odd surprise or sudden groove change. Maybe you could incorporate somethin like that in future.
Filthy track tho' =) |
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| VictorCharlie |
Thanks, some of the points that you people are highlighting are definetly true.
And about the vocals; just wanted a Joe Pesci vocal :D |
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