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Impact, by D Walker( uplifting trance) 320kbps
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| wavydalker |
Hi folks, Happy new year to you all,
Here is my first tune of 2006 so hope you enjoy, and I would appreciate all your feedback on it.
You all may download this track to play in your mixes if you want folks. I would be more than happy to hear it in a mix. Just PM me if you are going to stick it in though.
http://www.oldskool-masters.com/dw.html |
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| wavydalker |
I would love to see some feedback but I suppose I dont join in the other forums enough. I only come here to listen to other artists and give them my input, and put my tunes up, so sorry for not contributing enought, but it would still be nice to have a little input as I dont get much time to do this.
I feel if the tunes good then give it good feedback or if the tune is bad then give it a slating but when you dont get any feedback then.....its just petty |
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| staticblue |
hi there,
nice drive and mixing. i'm not too fond of this hard "2 note" bassline, but it definitly helps the drive. Maybe it needs an aditionnal lower part to the bassline to occupy more of the low freqs. Good pad sequence around 4:00 (maybe could need some more volume to counter the harder synths and fx)
the lead coming after in is a bit too thin to my taste but the melody it plays is very nice :)
good job ! |
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| Romi |
Nice melodies and sounds. I don't like the percussion that much, especially the hh's are very static (you could try some effects on them such as chorus and a little delay. It could overall use some more imo, maybe some toms or something. Nice lead and melody is ok too. Overall a nice track, but a bit too minimal imo, it could use more elements. Some more effects and some more synths at places. The overall mixquality is very nice btw. Good luck with it.
-Ron |
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| funkysouls |
| nice bass in the beginnig...good melody too.The tune definately holds me on but u can still improve on perc.well done:) |
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| wavydalker |
| quote: | Originally posted by staticblue
hi there,
nice drive and mixing. i'm not too fond of this hard "2 note" bassline, but it definitly helps the drive. Maybe it needs an aditionnal lower part to the bassline to occupy more of the low freqs. Good pad sequence around 4:00 (maybe could need some more volume to counter the harder synths and fx)
the lead coming after in is a bit too thin to my taste but the melody it plays is very nice :)
good job ! |
Thanx for your valuble input mate..To tell you ther truth, I had difficulty trying to make what seems such an easy 2 note bass line, but you are right it doesnt sound spot on yet. I will mabey double track the lead synth with another different synth sound but keep it the same melodey. Thanx again m8. |
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| wavydalker |
| quote: | Originally posted by Romi
Nice melodies and sounds. I don't like the percussion that much, especially the hh's are very static (you could try some effects on them such as chorus and a little delay. It could overall use some more imo, maybe some toms or something. Nice lead and melody is ok too. Overall a nice track, but a bit too minimal imo, it could use more elements. Some more effects and some more synths at places. The overall mixquality is very nice btw. Good luck with it.
-Ron |
Thanx for your opinion and I also have to agree with you. I rushed into the rest of the tune forgeting to fine tune such things like percussion and effects. You might notice I have just splattered a couple off effect beams aimlessly around there too. I will fix that before sending it out. Do you think it has release potential though? |
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| wavydalker |
| quote: | Originally posted by funkysouls
nice bass in the beginnig...good melody too.The tune definately holds me on but u can still improve on perc.well done:) |
Thanx m8, will get on with e improving part.:) |
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| Mr Rogers |
love the driving part of this track...love the subtle strings and the strings that come in the break, just not too crazy about the spacey arpeggio arp going on, but thats just prefference i guess.
and sound qual is top notch!
great tune |
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| FuzzyGreen |
| I loved it! Great track and good playback on my Event PS6 Studio monitors. |
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| wavydalker |
| Thanx for your feedback guy's, I really appreciate it:) |
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| bidor |
| nice work there mate, the only thing i found a bit.. was the tune in the middle it played a bit to long, i think it would we nicer if you would break it into parts imo. great stuff though! |
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