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| djsphere |
i started producing like 4-5 moths ago, though i never finished a track. i start a project and work on it for 3-4 maybe 5 days (2-3 hours a day) and after that i stop.
i have ideeas but after working on it for a few days i think it sucks and there is no point in finishing it. maybe i get too "intime" with the sound or somethin i don't know, or maybe it does suck.
anyway here's my latest project. i have doubts this is worth finishing.
link here
so, is it just me or it actualy sucks? maybe i listened to it too many times.
thanks! |
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| Dj Cola |
it doesnt suck it needs more percs and a brighter bass. what it doesnt need is that reversed sound to be that loud. the strings could use a low end more so it gets "power". you need a real break for that piano/synth coming in at 2:00. i would try to give the piano "more drive" to give the whole tune more of it.
cheers great tune otherwise, nice full sound. |
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| djsphere |
| thanks for the suggestions. ;) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Dude, I feel like that all the time, so bad that I have been workign sometimes full time over a track during days and one day I just listen to it and I say, god this is real bad and I delete it lol ...
Now, listening to ur tune :), I concur about the reversed sound should be more into the background, the bass is good but I think it has way much low freqs and sounds a bit, really bit dirty imo.
Interesting pads, Kick and Clap sound full and nice :).
In overall is going really nice, good buidup, waiting to listen to the full version, good job keep it up ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| djlogik |
| Give that reversed sound some more reverb is a big size and 3-5s delay. Get it really far in the background and it'll sound sweet. The bass I feel is too weak and it doesn't really drive the track like I think it should. That's just my opinion. I could really see that tune going really great as an uplifting tune if you build it up until about 4:30 mins or so and go from there. Good luck and see where that track brings you. |
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| djsphere |
thanks for the comments everyone, i'll check the bass and the reversed sound. good to see someone doesen't think it sucks hehe.
:D |
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| Lokhèn |
This is actually pretty good, you've come a long way in those couple of months... I agree with those other suggestions, and maybe work a litlle on the percs... I don't really like that open hat, sounds to preset'ish, if you change it, you will discover how those details like hihat actually can make a track sound alot better/worse..
And that melody is great!:eek: I really like that one.. |
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| djsphere |
| quote: | Originally posted by Lokhèn
And that melody is great!:eek: I really like that one.. |
thanks dude! i'll write the full melody soon i hope, that's the intro. ;) |
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| staticblue |
As long as you keep starting some new tracks you will keep progressing and learning new techniques.
Quite a few producers around here have been producing for several years (5-6 years for me) and i'm still far from being at a professionnel level. So if you've only been producing for a few months, i'd suggest being patient and spending lots of time working on lots of new tracks :) |
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| djsphere |
| quote: | Originally posted by staticblue
As long as you keep starting some new tracks you will keep progressing and learning new techniques.
Quite a few producers around here have been producing for several years (5-6 years for me) and i'm still far from being at a professionnel level. So if you've only been producing for a few months, i'd suggest being patient and spending lots of time working on lots of new tracks :) |
yeah, thx for the advice.
btw, i love your productions. :) i think you are one of the best in here. |
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