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Richard Gale - Tone/washed [138bpm Trancer] Full Track (pg. 3)
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| Speactra |
Very dark one ;)
I agree that this is kind of progressive.
Intresting melody.
I would make the drums stand out more.
The kick is great along with the bass.
Keep it up! |
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| Nemesis44 |
Hey Rich,
Nice work on this one.
Agreed it's very M.I.K.E. not sure about Push (Yes I know they are the same person).
Would love to have a bash at remixing this, got something on the boil that would work with this so if you are up for it send us a mail.
Cheers
Karl |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Mothering bass. I love this already. :D
Bass is kinda interfering with that pad. Look into that, I think.
You really need more in the perc layers. Especially up in the high end. This track has no real energy, and that seems to be what it's going for. Some more percussion would help with that. |
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| richg101 |
cheers guys for the replies:)
takkra - glad you liked mate. i thought it might appeal to ya.
speactra - thanks for your comments. it has been re equed and now the percs are more upfront:) glad you found it dark and progressive.
karl - id love you to rmx this mate! :) im prepairing a rmx pack at present for dj palm so ill give you the link aswell..
jex - thanks man! i always fail on the bass usually..
my next track will be much more energy filled. loads of percs and dark atmosphere!
cheers again mates
rich:) |
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| Drik |
Hey Richard, I feel a bit guilty not having reviewed much of your stuff considering that you have reviewed mine :(
So sorry for that hehe
Ok, listening now.
Nice subby bass with a cruchy bassline.
Right off the bat I can see that it could do with more higher frequencies in the final master to loose the "boxed in" feeling. But thats just a mastering thing so back to the actual track :D
Nice disted square? at 1min. I like the the strings sliding into the music at around 1:54, lovely stuff. Good synth sequence at 2:28.
I'd like something more to happen at 4 min, maybe try cranking up those strings and add more of them?
Nice at 5:20, good energy there.
I think this track mainly needs a bit more variations, but it sounds good so far :D |
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| richg101 |
thanks for the review drik.
the distorted square is a d+b style square i made:)
i have remastered and its much more open and full now:)
cheers
rich:) |
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| Nemesis44 |
| quote: | Originally posted by richg101
karl - id love you to rmx this mate! :) im prepairing a rmx pack at present for dj palm so ill give you the link aswell.. |
Can't wait!
Cheers
The TA formerly known as Nem ;) |
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| richg101 |
palm and nem.
hopefully ill have the pack ready for you tonight:)
rich:) |
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| Speactra |
Rich?
Can I also have a try on a remix? |
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| DJ Dinz |
I LOVE IT!
can i have the full version to spin?? very wicked & dark trance!
cool!:D :D |
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| richg101 |
the mentalists who wanted a rmx of this....
check your pm's:)
rich:) |
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| richg101 |
phat track!
you done the track proud mate! i was getting well into it and then the sample ended:(
you have taken my chilled original and made it your own:) great drive as i expected and theres loads of potential. i think my main melody would sound better as a subtle flavour cos the track sounds awsome and i feel the melody is a bit trancy for the techy style.
i love the percs the most. and when the bassline sample comes in it really works amazin!
you have used the pack i sent to its full without sticking to the original sound at all..:)
im excited!
rich:) |
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