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[techno] Pjotr G - Driving Ashtray
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Pjotr G
Hey

This is my first production of 2006 :p

It's a techno track:

http://www.whiteroachproductions.nl...ing_Ashtray.mp3

Naturally, I'd love to hear opinions :)

Greets PJ
Dj Cola
it sounds really pro but i dont like those.. ehrm "winding" background sounds :s they are too weird for me ;). really nice but not my cup of tea you now :toothless
linkmage
Verrrry trippy!!!!.....:) percs are great...I don't like that clap :( smells like trance clap...kick is very deep...! some automation too fast with filter I think...
nice Looped piece!!! :)
nice trippy atrack,but need some work with structure...
9/10
TOR
that is one mighty kick indeed!

i for one love those weird background noises :crazy:
i'd love to hear this on a big system as well. should destroy the dancefloor
Mr Rogers
not really digg'n those background noises to much...
nils
hell yes!
great stuff
Pillow One
seriously dude this is insane , really dig that stuff !
marco v is a gnome next to u :D

Great stuff keep rocking !!!


:wtf:
Terry Barker
Ah a new PJ track :)

Nice startup, as mentioned the kick is massive. Synth work sounds brill, filtering in and out of the background, nice effects. Bass is as always bouncy. Breakdown synth is mad, likeing the changes here and there, really break the track up. Percussion is as always spot on.

Keep em coming i say :)
IgnazZio
Listening.. Always liked your stuff...

-Great kick, GREAT percs :eyes:
-Tune is rollin', moving...
-Btw: nice title ;)
-I like that offbeat noise ('uh')
-Nice hihats
-Automation is too fast... (1'37")
-Ride is cool, not too loud

Nice production, only 1 thing would make it very cool...

This:

Kick: | . . . | . . . | . . . |
Snare:. . . . . . . | . . . . .

Special offbeat snare on a weird place.... Would be great, just try it.


6.5/10 (is good)
Pjotr G
quote:
Originally posted by IgnazZio
-Btw: nice title ;)


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Nice production, only 1 thing would make it very cool...

This:

Kick: | . . . | . . . | . . . |
Snare:. . . . . . . | . . . . .

Special offbeat snare on a weird place.... Would be great, just try it.




tnx, I named it after my car.

A snair right before a kick is not-done right now...just like a benassi bassline

Mike_Foyle
excellent stuff, i like it alot!
djsphere
nice stuff. i agree, do a breakdown. :)
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