Charlie Darwin - Amazing Life
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nhibberd |
Hey all,
A slight glitch in this track. out of tune lead for about half a minute, but i'm too lazy to fix it right now. I'm just fishing for some feedback. I need a bit of a confidence boost so compliment me a lot please.
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kind regards,
Nick |
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richg101 |
good drive but kick seams a bit too thin and punchy. add a nice deep slower one behind it? bass is nice and original.
first break. reminds me of that typical sound you hear at a weired late night bar.
beat back. i like it now:) but at 2;24 it goes into melody that i feel isnt nessisary? i liked the sound before, with just that single note. the melody isnt really sophisticated for my liking. i bet all your nice sub melodies work well if you just use that single note throughtout.
maybe do a dub version cos i recon it would make the most of the overal sound you got with this.
nice track
rich:) |
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