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DJ Subnautic - Yellow Sky (Original Mix) Trance
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| DJ Subnautic |
Hello guys!
I've worked on this track quite long, i know there is many work i have to get this track sound perfect, but i think it's a good beginning.
here it is!
It would be kind if you'd give me a comment, on what i must make better, or what you like on this track.
DJ Subnautic - Yellow Sky (Original Mix) 192 kbps
Thanks for downloading and listening!
DJ Subnautic |
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| Terry Barker |
Listening...
Kick could do with a change, same with the bass very standard stuff. The synths are on the same way. Percussion is simplistic. Producing has not been long for you. I like the crazy sample in the breakdown hehe, yarr :thepirate. I like the idea tho, good stuff, aslo the synth in the second breakdown is very tiesto. Imo u need more expereience and keep working at stuff. The mastering is ok volume wise tone the effects down. hehe wut a sample :D. |
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| Hardfire2002 |
I have to say, that you can hear you have a lot to learn... First of all the kick, it seem to closed in, like were there a freq on. All though i like you bass, but the lack of effects kind of makes it to booring. Thats sad, because with your bass you have done a good work.
Your choice of sounds could use a little more reverb and eq. I do not like your hihat, its to noisy.
At last, your mastering (im sorry) SUCKS. Your need to stabilize the volume. Some places i can hear an effect that's to high of volume, turn it down.
The end of the track, should end with a boom, or you could build it down, like you had build it up before.
To the good thing of the track. I like you strings/orkester, AWESOME.
But you can do much better, if you just think of, "what can i do to make it even more cool".
you will get by me: 3½ / 10
Best regards
Simon (Hardeja)
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| THE_Chris |
Just heard this in your promo mix.
The idea is definatly there. Strings are crazy. But it does need a bit of work. Touch it up a bit and send it off to Armin ;) |
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