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Dj Rinster - Sequence
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| bidor |
hey guys thought you might wanted to hear my latest song..
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any feedback would be greatly appreciated!:toothless |
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| bidor |
| :confused: ......... |
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| wavydalker |
I like your idea mate, but I think you need some serious mastering to clean the whole mix up. I also suggest that you pread out the sections a bit longer , at least 8 bars before changing in to another section. You could drop the whole thing into a breakdown aswell. I like the bubbly bass line though. Keep pluggin away m8 and you will get there.:)
please review me now: http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...547#post5515547 |
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| Bl@ckOut |
You should really take your time for the build-up. Like wavydalker says, make the different sections a little bit longer. Furthermore i'm not a big fan of that bassline. For me, there's not much structure in that bassline, but maybe that's a very personal opinion. Other people may like it :)
The sound that comes in at 1:10 is not bad. You should have done a bit more with that. So there are some good idea's in this track.
And it needs some mastering indeed ;) |
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| bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Bl@ckOut
You should really take your time for the build-up. Like wavydalker says, make the different sections a little bit longer. Furthermore i'm not a big fan of that bassline. For me, there's not much structure in that bassline, but maybe that's a very personal opinion. Other people may like it :)
The sound that comes in at 1:10 is not bad. You should have done a bit more with that. So there are some good idea's in this track.
And it needs some mastering indeed ;) |
thanks for the feedback guys, i appreciate it! i'll try and remake the song with more lines,
"van een belg moet je het maar hebben he" ;) |
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| Bl@ckOut |
| quote: | Originally posted by bidor
"van een belg moet je het maar hebben he" ;) |
Als ge't maar weet :D |
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| bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Bl@ckOut
Als ge't maar weet :D |
haha:D |
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| djlogik |
| I have to admit...during this whole tune I feel like I'm just totally confused. Mastering is definitely needed. Personally the intro just doesn't fit my taste. Personally I don't think your sound really fit the vibe you're trying to give the tune. Give it some more work and it should be better. |
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