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melodic/uplifting trance [192kbps clip]
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| djsphere |
back again! :D
for those of you who checked my last sample, this is a continuation of it, yes i'll probably finish this track...
for those who didn't this is a track i'm working on at the moment and i would like your oppinion on it. the clip i posted starts just after the intro.
this will be the main "feel" of the track i think.
btw, since this is gonna be my first track i gues i'll be needing an artist name, right? any suggestions? :p
a name for the track would be nice too.
sample here
all comments apreciated. :) |
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| djlogik |
| Yeah I remember the sample you posted awhile ago and I liked it for the most part. I'm taking a look at your track clip right now. It's more melodic than uplifting, but I like the overall feel of the track. Nothing too special with the percussion pretty much all standard. Maybe use some more variations? Make your bass a little louder I think. I feel there's a little too much repetition with the main melody you're using though. Having a submelody could help out a lot. I love your main synth sound though. This is a pretty good track mate keep up the good work. Drop me a message once you finish it so I can have a listen. Check out my track if you could too :) |
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| djsphere |
yeah..i kinda agree on the pecussion.
thx for the relpy. ;)
edit: and check your thread |
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| iloop |
| tis good mate, like the flow and feel of this track... kind of chillout vibes... agreed with logik on the rythms- needs some more variation in elements used. othewise sounds like a great start :) |
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| djsphere |
| quote: | Originally posted by iloop
tis good mate, like the flow and feel of this track... kind of chillout vibes... agreed with logik on the rythms- needs some more variation in elements used. othewise sounds like a great start :) |
glad you like it! :D |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hi,
Ur artistic name and track name is very personal thang dude, imo, I could not use an artistic name someone else sugessted me except if it's a nick I gained over the time, ur artistic name it's part of expression :D, I like Djsphere, why not to keep it? ;)
Now the track:
I concur about the drums, they sound a bit dry, basic, but they do the job pretty good :), melodie is a bit repetitive, I concur with dj logik in almost all, but I may add ur sound is ´pretty clean, that's something that took me months to kinda fix lol :D.
Very good for to be ur first track dude, congratulaitons on that and good luck :D.
Kopi =o. |
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