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Del Phonic
http://www.acutemusic.co.uk/Del-Pho..._-_Stage_18.mp3

Clik above or below! Just copyrighted this track. Its being perfected, retouched and mastered early feb and given out soon after in time for the Godskitchen vs Slinky @ the BIC. LEND ME YOUR EARS and give me your thoughts. Thanks. All appreciated.

Del Phonic

http://www.acutemusic.co.uk/Del-Pho..._-_Stage_18.mp3
Final Call
wrong place man..go to the artist promotions area
aquila
Hey dude, I noticed you also posted this in the Producers Promotion forum....you're more likely to get a response from there.

I don't have time to listen to it now, but when I get back I might have a gander.
Sh!fty
wrong place to post this idd,
anywayz, mastering/equalizing is good, sound in the beginning is a bit annoying, melody is a bit uninspired

Keep on producing/ cheerz
qiushiming
quote:
Originally posted by Sh!fty
wrong place to post this idd,
anywayz, mastering/equalizing is good, sound in the beginning is a bit annoying, melody is a bit uninspired

Keep on producing/ cheerz


hmmm yeah what is that sound in the beginning....it is kinda annoying

synths kinda remind me of videogame music.......
Del Phonic
What sound is annoying? the stabs from the synth? or the clicky bubbling sound?
Who R U?
Drums sound quiet. Layer your kick maybe with another that has a bit of boom to it. Snare could be tweaked with a little more attack so that it has more presents. Maybe spice up the drims with more variations. I want to feel more on the low freqency end. Delay and reverb on the beeps. Effects can do wonders to a sound. Is there a drop? Also good to have dramatic pauses and crescendos. Cords work and have potental. But needs to progress in a way that keeps your brain entertained.

Keep up the good work!
discobiscuit
I'm downloading it now and will listen to it tomorrow... i'll let you know what I think...

bisco
djlogik
Your kick could be much stronger. Your percs are a little too low for my taste. If they were stronger, you'd get even more drive to the tune. I like this track actually it's pretty well done.
Del Phonic
Respect. email me dezbad1@hotmail.com if u want feedback on samples.
Del
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