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[Vocal/Uplifting] Altuna - ??? (Sample 320Kbps)
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| DJ Dinz |
Hi Guys,
This is my latest track.. which i spent 2hours on it yesterday...
I had planned to add vocal in it.. but before that.. i need to make sure that the melody n stuff r cool enough...
so need feedback! LOL :D :D
CLICK HERE
NEW VERSION
PS: Positive & Negative feedback warmly welcome here!
Cheers & thanks to all of you! |
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| Kuffdam |
Got this little promo sent to me today....
Great track, I would playlist this for sure
Send me the full version when you have it
Cheers
Kuffdam |
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| The Drow |
Nice riff at the start.
You need a top layer bass.
The pad is nice.
I like the gated white noise.
I like the lead.
Vocals will defenitly fit in there.
Would you like me to try to write the lyrics.
Nice arp, very 99',it works but it's very unoriginal. Try to add something else on top of it. Except the pluck I mean.
Maybe some squares like in Altuna?
I think you are improving.
You need more percs in the track.
The arp is too loud. Way too loud.
Cool track, I would remix it if you'll finish it.
Omer. |
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| DjDefected |
| Pretty good track mate. like the melody percussion is good. Keep up the good work |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by The Drow
Nice riff at the start.
You need a top layer bass.
The pad is nice.
I like the gated white noise.
I like the lead.
Vocals will defenitly fit in there.
Would you like me to try to write the lyrics.
Nice arp, very 99',it works but it's very unoriginal. Try to add something else on top of it. Except the pluck I mean.
Maybe some squares like in Altuna?
I think you are improving.
You need more percs in the track.
The arp is too loud. Way too loud.
Cool track, I would remix it if you'll finish it.
Omer. |
I concur, but sounds very cool man ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| Mycron |
the lead sounds like flutlicht,
very nice work mate!
looking forward to hear the final version!
cheers,
Peter:) |
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| DJ Dinz |
Halo Guys...
Thnx for the reply n feedback :) :)
i will finish it.. n add vocal with it
cheers! :D |
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| DJ Dinz |
| quote: | Originally posted by The Drow
Nice riff at the start.
You need a top layer bass.
The pad is nice.
I like the gated white noise.
I like the lead.
Vocals will defenitly fit in there.
Would you like me to try to write the lyrics.
Nice arp, very 99',it works but it's very unoriginal. Try to add something else on top of it. Except the pluck I mean.
Maybe some squares like in Altuna?
I think you are improving.
You need more percs in the track.
The arp is too loud. Way too loud.
Cool track, I would remix it if you'll finish it.
Omer. |
hi Omer...
cool if u want to write me a lyrics heheh
n i'll send u when i finished the track :) |
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| alanzo |
Composition sucks... other than that, it's pretty horrible. Very stereotypical/predictable/it's been done 1000x over.
Keep trying, you'll get it eventually ;) |
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| DaveBegic |
Had a quick listen last night. Not a bad effort there man.. the style is a bit typical and I think the chords don't really "hit it". Perhaps theres not enough happening I don't know but the tune seems kind of dated. Its a bit predictable.
Nevermind what the above me said, he broke up with his boyfriend yesterday :/. |
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| Aquarian |
| Percs were very nice. I found that the pad sounded pretty thin or too simple at first. Would be nice with some extra layers - maybe one with stereo panning. Excellent sounds all around. Lots of drive and energy. I like. Melody isn't bad, but I think I prefered your previous ones (altuna, crystal sense). |
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| azndragon0613 |
| The bass needs a bit more drive. Sounds kind of subdued. The pads are nice and full. I like. The main lead is crazy here. Melody sounds fantastic. Vocals will definitely fit nicely here. Good work mate. |
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