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[Progressive trance] Sunshine Highway
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| sevenseas |
Some time since I've posted or either reviewed a tune here. Was kinda busy with school, but anyway I've got some more time now and I'm using it for producing :)
I'm working on this new progressive tune and I think it's actually pretty OK. Still just a sample cause it's not yet finished and I'd like the feedback of you guys, to see if this could be releasable so I can seriously continue with this :D
Thnxz in advance and happy listing;)
http://people.zeelandnet.nl/venkel/sunshine_highway.mp3 |
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| Tygon |
Percs and melody are brilliant... I love the feel of this track! Really sexy and sleek... great potential to this...
first thing I notice is that your low bass synth is drowning out most of the other sounds in the track.... most importantly, your bass kick almost completely disappears within the low freq....... your breakbeat would be a great idea if it carried the intro like it's supposed to.
Everything else sounds excellent... with a little cleaning up this could be a stormer... |
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| sevenseas |
Thnxz for the feedback :), gonna look at the bass synth. I've got some more idea's for it aswell. I'm also thinking of making the intro a bit longer. I think I can post a new sample tommorow.
And more feedback is always welcome:D |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Pad in opening is kinda annoying by itself.
The break is kind of annoying.
Other than that, I like it. |
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| sevenseas |
| to be honest, I dont really like the pad aswell. :D But I do think that the break beat is kinda cool, well new sample tommorow for shure ;) |
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| Speactra |
This track has got potential! It's a really great atmosphere you've created.
I like the melodies a lot.
But then there is the bass, and pads. The pads need to be smoother imo..
But I'm going to check your sample tommorow.
| quote: | Originally posted by Tygon
with a little cleaning up this could be a stormer... |
Totally agree!
Keep it up!
//Alexander |
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| sevenseas |
Updated...
Updated the sample, still there are alot things I dont like. But I've got new idea's for it now and a new melody. There's also some strange synth that rungs trough the tune doesnt fit in it. Dunno how it got there but I'll fix that in the next sample, changed a few things aswell. |
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