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ravedude16
i am just about finished [i think] my first song but it needs something else and i hope someone can tell me what.

you can hear it at http://djmatr.tripod.com/..its Thebe - The Beginning ..listen and tell me what you think!:D

thanks!
mat
dj cuttof
HI MAN,,,, I HAVE TO TELL YOU THE FIRST SYNTH YOU ADDED SUCKSSSSSS,,THE SECOND ONE IS ''AWESOME'' AND THE MELODY TOO,,YOU NEED '' More hihats'' if you want the people to dance with your music,,,the thing is Percussiom'' hihats'' ''rims'' ''toms'' and the volume is bad,,,you NEED a higher volume,,more bass,,,,and more ''emotions'' is a little bit boring,,,Good look ''DUDE''
Pjotr G
eh yes and now a reply from someone who doesn't have a seriously messed up keyboard.

They have a forum for this topic. It's the amateur DJ/Producer thingy forum.
I'm a nag hehe
Peter Campbell
ravedude16 nice work on your first track. try and change and chop it up a bit to keep the listener interested and bring up the bassline a little.

if this was your very first track, in time and a lot of work you could really
go some where in music production.

good luck and all the best.
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