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[Progressive] Cristian Fuentes- Whenever (128kb Sample)
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| Kris Xperiment |
Alright, well guess what, I fell in love with Andy Moor's music ok?? Is that such a bad thing? I've listened to some great producers on TA and garnered the balls to produce prog with some vocals in it. ANyone have any comments about which way this track is headed? What direction I could take it in? :D
Well, it would be a blesing to hear what you guys have to say about this 2 min demo
Link (Yousendit)
http://s57.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...F723VOUT296BMYR
Thanks :tongue3 |
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| Iron Fist |
| Well your progressive side has improved alot. This is the kind of stuff that I like and especially Markus Schulz. But you need your own vocals. Have your Girlfriend sing some for you instead of using Skakira's. |
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| djsphere |
listening.....
intro is good, nice percs, a bit empty tho.
pads are nice, bass is a bit wierd, to thin i think.
dude, is that shakira? :haha:
nice atmosphere overall.
could use more low fq.
like teh vocals :p |
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| The Drow |
The congas are too loud.
And they are too heavy, they should be more high pitched and thiner.
nice use of the vocals.
but you need to get ur own.
The sine is nice but you need more elements...
Omer. |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hi,
Those breathy pads sound too dry imo, like a wav I would use some more dreamy, lol, shakira, fits nice :P.
Overall is not bad, sounds in a very early stage, but I like the drive and the feeling, but right now all appears to sudden, adding all the elements slowly would be very nice.
Cool ;).
Kop =o. |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Great sounds in the intro. Very proggy feel right from the getgo.
That pad sounds like the AirChorus sample from Floops. Kind of throws the feel of the track off.
Teehee, Shakira, lol.
You're doing the same stuff with harsh high end noise a lot that you did in Viento Azul. Don't do that.
This track has a great feel to it. Keep that up. |
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| Takkra |
Gr00vy..
I like the percs in the start,
they work really well together with the original bassline you introduce. pads remind me a bit of a fruityloops preset, try to make them just a bit wetter ;) itll just give them that bit extra.
Shakira crawls in the track very seductive, gives the track a more sensitive, emotional feeling.
conga's arent too loud.. theyre just perfect.
Goodz:
very very nice "sexy" atmosphere, thank shakira too chris ;)!
great percussion :) a little detail on the hihats. perfect volume :p! I never ever get them at a perfect volume lol.
"Badz":
Nothing is really bad about the track, the only thing is that the pad is a bit dry, and I would cautiously advice some more synth elements.. for example a plucky lead, wich gives it a more chillout feeling, not to much notes after eachother like an arp but two or three notes apart from eachother.
In the end:
Nice groove, sexy atmosphere, this could be a big one man ;)
keep it up! finish this track :D
so this is progressive..:happy2: |
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