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| Kris Xperiment |
TranceAddicts
I recenty posted regarding one of the tunes I was working on and got some helpful reviews and comments on how to better the track. I added a lot of new things and ended up completing the tune. The Shakira vocals serve as a simple marker to remind me where the new vocals I'm hoping on replacing them with will go. I added a new melody at the end of the tune I'm personally happy with it. :eek:
If anyone has some suggestions or comments about how to better the track, i would be grateful. :disbelief
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Thanks guys and girls |
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| djlogik |
Bump :tongue2
I can't listen at the moment, but I'll definitely give the track a listen when I get back home. |
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| djlogik |
I'm currently listening to the track so I'll give you a report right now.
The intro has a very nice feel to it.
At 0:47ish when you bring in that piano I'm loving it.
The overall feel is really nice so far.
I like the pad. What are you using for it.
I think the bassline could vary a little more, but it is alright.
Overall the tune is pretty nice. I'd rate it a 7.5/10
Great work and I'm looking forward to hearing more work from you. |
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| thoughtlessjex |
The pad is better than last time, although I think it's a bit too wet on the phaser.
Mixing is excellent.
I love the portamento synth at 4:40 or so. I like how it comes in so slowly.
I think the mid bass could use some delay. |
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| azndragon0613 |
alright i'm givign it a listen,
Beginning of the song is nice. Some of the effects seem a bit off key or lack of resolve but I can see that working to some effect. The piano is very nice. Love how it comes in. The pads are incredible here man. Nice airy feel to it. What did you use to make them? Excellent atmosphere feel here. Synths are great too.
I like what you have here. When you do get the vocals, I think you should play it throughout the song, not just here and there. It'll make it stronger. Keep up the good work! |
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| lightside |
| pretty cool, very trancey, nice touch, i like. |
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| Dj Cola |
Say cheese! Shakira vocals!
well the whole tune is very melodic and the synths and all sounds pro... not much more i can say since trance (eppic etc) isnt my cup of tea exactly!
cheers on a great track |
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| washout |
i was like that sounds like shakira.
maybe i should read lol. |
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| Kris Xperiment |
| Thanks guys for all the reviews, Right now Im in the process of getting the vocals recorded ;p. |
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| covert23 |
| nice n light track good intro although percs are a bit bright at start but work well in the tune, piano is nice....keep it up..... |
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