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| Dj Cola |
add low endz! ^^, they rock :).
i would like to listen to the v. without highs :)
omg i added gollum vocals to my track >.< |
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| staticblue |
Hey Ryan,
the mixing in this one is better than in your last track IMO, sounding pretty solid :) I think your percs are too "excited" or have too much highs.
The basslines and pads are sounding good here, the hibass pattern is interesting but it creates a bit of a "phase" when the subbass comes in. It's not due to the sound, just the pattern i think.
The oboe sequence is very nice, i think i had already heard it in a clip from you. Good job on the breakdown !
Overall the track is a good one, not the style i like most at the moment but definitly a nice work. |
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| Dj Cola |
oooh a review from the great static blue :D
i just poster to tell you that your track is good stuff... again :D |
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| Rayan |
thanks Jon (Static)
and thanks Cola! yeah, a little to much highs! But you learn by doing wrong :P |
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| Dj Cola |
| tell me about it :D i used fruity samples for 4 months before someone told me they suck badly :D |
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| funkysouls |
i m makin a collection of ur choons brother.
excellent work ;) |
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| Rayan |
ehe!
thats funny to hear, and great to! |
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| bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by funkysouls
i m makin a collection of ur choons brother.
excellent work ;) |
lol thats exactly what im doing to, im only missing fantasy part 1...
ryan could you please give a link? cheers mate:) |
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| iloop |
| i really like the 1st bassline in this, unusual and originality pay off. Thought the track seems a little static for a while as compared to some of your more energetic tracks. The same melodic line hangs for over 2min...The break has some nice elements and after about 50 seconds of a long break before the oboe im now thinking this is more chillout trance which is nice to see from you. The oboe I think is great. the melody is awesome...thought i'd love to see that oboe melody go up the scale a bit more :) just prefrence. Main melody coming in now and it follows the chill kind of atmophere you have going here. The oboe overpowers the main synthline melody and i think they could be balanced a bit better... Personaly i think if you cut this track down to around 9min and introduce new elements a bit quicker and with more drive the track would be a bit better. Though as always you have great elements in your tracks that stand out above the amateur level onto an originality of your own. Keep up the great work. |
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| globalwarming |
very nice man!
i agree about the low frequancy... you should work more on your bassdrum, make is clearer and punchy. (i think best would fit an above & beyond kick).
good luck |
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| iloop |
| quote: | Originally posted by globalwarming
very nice man!
i agree about the low frequancy... you should work more on your bassdrum, make is clearer and punchy. (i think best would fit an above & beyond kick).
good luck |
do you have an idea where one might find an Above and beyond kick? |
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