|
dbl - Ocean of Life (comments please)
|
View this Thread in Original format
| dbl |
left click here
don't have much to say about it, but what do you think of it?
i can fix a .flp file if someone want to remix it
just tell me |
|
|
| SmellsExcellent |
hey, thats a great tune! I really like it. Keep up the good work!
-Marc |
|
|
| dbl |
thank's
any more comments? |
|
|
| Lightworks |
i'm off to download it ;)
i'll give opinions later when it's here
can u check out my track beyond the stars too?
your remix will be on our new page soon, we'll post it when it's there ;)
btw we might need a 128 kbps version of your remix, because mp3.com doesn't accept the higher quality versions.
kind regards, Wim @ LW |
|
|
| DoubleDiagnosis |
Sounds most times pretty nice. Track starts nice so it has your attention directly.
Point of critism is the part that starts around 2:00 could be better worked out sometimes that "Big" bang comes to often and to quick behind eachother and the changeover around 3:18 could be better I think but that's my objective opinion.
Be still nice worked out track that deserves a download ;)
Double Out |
|
|
| dbl |
thanks for the comments.
I will make a 128 kbps version when i'm using my other computer lightworks..
and i think i downloaded your track on my other computer lightworks, but i forgott to comment it...
well... i download it one's more on this computer.. a comment comes soon |
|
|
| mantisnl |
| dll it now m8 :toothless |
|
|
| Lightworks |
hey dbl, as promised my honest opinions ;)
i think it's a track with lots of variety in it, which is good.
the intro is very melodic, but then at the 2-3 min mark the song changes into a somewhat picotto style track (maybe the change could be better worked out somehow... but that's my opinion :)).
the percussion is great, that's what reminded me of our good friend mauro. it's got the typical mauro picotto structure too, melodic at times and then suddenly leave the melodic thing and start with hard beats and lots of snares and percussion.
a good job, but a bit more work on the changes and it'd be perfect :)
best greetz, Wim @ LW |
|
|
| dbl |
thank's lihtworks...
so you like the picotto style thing when it leaves the melodie or what?
if you don't i maybe could try keep the melodie in someway when the drums start...
thank's again |
|
|
| marco.V |
hey i like it except some breaks (the famous 2.00)
id like to remix plz upload flp
nice work |
|
|
| dbl |
what is the famous 2.00?
anyway... i can put up the .flp file tomorrow.. maybe today, but i don't think so... |
|
|
| marco.V |
i was talking about the second minute
ok cya tomorrow
great drums
bye |
|
|
|
|
