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My First Track (fiesta 14)
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| djgosher2023 |
hey people
this my first time finishing a track and putting up over the internet.its an uplifting trance song
id like to get some feedback off some of you people on this track ive made and how i can inprove it more
i have'nt done much eqing or compression on the track yet.id just like to get some feedbak first.ie arrangement,samples,levels and over all sound.
most of all how can i improve the guitar more in the track
..ive only 230 of ram so my effects are like gold dust.have to use them very carefully or my cpu goes wild
http://s42.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...VZ1YMYI5STTAWE4
cheers gosher |
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| covert23 |
| will listen on a good system tomorrow... get a bigger computer with more ram..you wont regret it....more possabilitys more efx...... |
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| djgosher2023 |
i am.in the process of saving:)
cheers for downloading |
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| DJ Renekk |
Well the bassline is great "who cares if it is simple, sounds good to me"
Other than that I would lose the guitar and get a much harder sound "Syncing two oscillator"
Since you are new I won't be too hard but there has to be something to pull the track along a little faster. A good hook will also, chord structure too.
If you don't mind I would like to do a little remix to show you what careful arranging could get you. My system is not much better than yours. the key to sucess is understading everything. From arrangment, to how to program your sounds. Its all careful.
Last tid-bit, never end with a straight bassdrum ;-)
Hope to be able to remix a bit, hope you like the advice.
DJ Renekk |
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| djgosher2023 |
yeah trying to get that hook is the hardest part.im always working on them parts..how did it sound on ur system?
the ending needs much more working to it but i want to get some feedback first.
your more than welcome to remix it.will i have to send you the samples or what way?
i own the copywrites :) :D |
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| gwrmarines |
Not too shabby for your first tune. It is missing something though...i couldnt tell you what though...needs something to carry it?
Im also new to producing and im working on my first tune probably going to be very simple but oh well, nice job. |
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| ASFSE |
hey
i took a listen, and i agree with what renekk said.
it needs some structure and form, and a more pronounced theme.
keep at it! |
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| djgosher2023 |
| cheers guys for the feedback :) im goin try work more on the guitar try get it carry the track along more.put few more notes in or try a different synth :tongue3 |
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| DJ Renekk |
| quote: | Originally posted by djgosher2023
yeah trying to get that hook is the hardest part.im always working on them parts..how did it sound on ur system?
the ending needs much more working to it but i want to get some feedback first.
your more than welcome to remix it.will i have to send you the samples or what way?
i own the copywrites :) :D |
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Well the sound overall was very clean, almost too clean. It needs some atmosphere behind it all "light reverb?" to cover the black spots. Also there needs to be more going on at anyone time. Most of the time the track seems empty in terms of things going on. The actual sound was good on my system.
Will try to remix the track, adding my own hoohaa.
Cheers
DJ Renekk |
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| djgosher2023 |
cheers for the comments dj renekk
the type of sound in which im trying to create is that clean sound.i have listened to it a few more times without doing anything.it does need more going on to keep the listerner interested.
im going try work on some more elements to bring to it. ie atomsphere sounds as you mentioned
im going start adding few effect this time round and work on eqing and compression.
can anybody else can give some feedback would be great ;) |
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| Luke Terry |
pretty good for a first go. just following on from what others have said, get some more samples + fill the sound up a bit more - even if it means a new computer. dell do good ones for a few hundred pounds
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