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[Breaks] Aromin - Alone Again
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| VaNFeCto |
| Just a break tracks I have been working on, would like to see what you guys think. I dont know I just cant seem to get my tracks to the next level, just looking for some constructive criticism, and there is nobetter place than here.Aromin - Alone Again |
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| Lakeus |
First of all the track is mastered too loud because itīs clipping a little bit right now. Solid beat... and some nice effects. The bass line should have little bit more higher frequencies because now it gets lost in the mix. You should try to add a 303-like arpeggiated synth line to the track because now it is missing all kinds of dirty synth sounds. Listen to some commercial track of this kind and you can probably hear the number of all kinds of synth sounds going on. Now the track seems to be missing some important sound layers. You should try to write a stronger, more distinctive main melody for the track to make it more coherent. The synth sound at 3:45 is pretty cool!!
Cheers, Lakeus |
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| VaNFeCto |
| thanx a lot for the tips man, I ran into that problem and I guess I made a rookie mistake, because when the when the beat comes back after the breakdown, it is totally lost so I just bumped up the compression which isnt the real way to fix the problem and I knew that but I did it anyway. |
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| The Drow |
The kick is too big.
I liked the blip thing.
The name doesn't fit.
I like the bass but it's drowned in the mix.
The melody is nice. Nothing too interesting.
I don't like the piano melody.
The guitar is ok.
5/10
Omer. |
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| VaNFeCto |
| thanx man for the input. |
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