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:::FIRST TRACK::: CrossingLand - Journey (192kbps)
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| gwrmarines |
Howdy,
Well here is my first track. I don't think im finished with it yet im going to keep working on it till my knowledge of the program is better, i think it has potential. Plus its only 2:30 lol kinda short.
Let me know what you think!!
http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...1J3AEDCHJU4DFZ8 |
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| mysticalninja |
| you have good melodys and ideas, but you need to get rid of the fruityloops kick :) |
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| gwrmarines |
| quote: | Originally posted by mysticalninja
you have good melodys and ideas, but you need to get rid of the fruityloops kick :) |
Cool, im going to work on a new kick. Sounds so much different with other speakers. I'm using Bose headphones, i think they are pretty good. |
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| The Drow |
Nice pads at the intro.
The kick is too FLish.
Nice bass, but it should have much more low end.
The perc with the flanger has too much flanger on it.
You should have more percussion layers.
I like the saw.
You should try to write another melody on top of it.
The track is really short.
Omer. |
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| gwrmarines |
| quote: | Originally posted by The Drow
Nice pads at the intro.
The kick is too FLish.
Nice bass, but it should have much more low end.
The perc with the flanger has too much flanger on it.
You should have more percussion layers.
I like the saw.
You should try to write another melody on top of it.
The track is really short.
Omer. |
Thanks for the info helps me out.:)
What do you mean the bass should have more low end? |
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| The Drow |
| quote: | Originally posted by gwrmarines
Thanks for the info helps me out.:)
What do you mean the bass should have more low end? |
It means that it should have a sub bass.
Check the spectrom and you'll see that there aren't many low frequencies.
Omer. |
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