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RickyM & Nomen Nescio present <R.N.M> - Stargliding (pg. 4)
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| Nomen Nescio |
Wow the feedback we get is unbelievable and amazing for us :) Thanks everyone. We are so glad to read people still enjoy the more old-school trance :)
Groundzero please let us know indeed if you feel the beat is adequate.
Cheers,
Menno and Rick |
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| groundzero74 |
Listening again, The beat does seems quite "shallow" at first (i don't mean the very beginning - it's supposed to be like that there), but what does strike me is that it never weakens troughout the track.
Most tracks suffer from this in the busy parts - when playing solo the beat is kick-arse, but when the full load is on you hardly hear it snap in the background - this is NOT the case here.
The acid (bass)line - is a bit overused & stays at its cutoff/resonance freq troughout the track up to about 8:00min (could use some variation) - and overpowers the bassline beneath (playing solo only around 8:20)
About the mastering, wavelab global analysis confirms what i felt, the dynamic range in the track is lacking - i mean the whole track is loud troughout.
This reduces the impact & feeling of loudness during the climax (average loudness is -12.3db , dyn.range: -7.32db max to -63.15db min - normally you should have around -80db min dyn. range ...) As a result the whole track feels a bit too compressed imo.
There are other ways than compression to increase the overal loudness of the track an keep the dynamic range ...
(e.g.: Static Blue - Activa - Broken Morning :-5.13db max , - 78db min, -11.6db average)
This doesn't mean i don't like the track - quite the opposite actually.
The melody is great ! and the strings( / bagpipe?) during the break is marvellous. This is quite a piece of workmanship you guys got there, oozing with inspiration. Get signed already !
J. |
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| soundrush |
hey guys,
lovely tune..
.. and a great choice of sounds: the acid line that emerges in the intro and goes through the entire track. those strings which give somewhat a symphonic feel to it.
i realy like it. |
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| RickyM |
| quote: | Originally posted by groundzero74
Listening again, The beat does seems quite "shallow" at first (i don't mean the very beginning - it's supposed to be like that there), but what does strike me is that it never weakens troughout the track.
Most tracks suffer from this in the busy parts - when playing solo the beat is kick-arse, but when the full load is on you hardly hear it snap in the background - this is NOT the case here.
The acid (bass)line - is a bit overused & stays at its cutoff/resonance freq troughout the track up to about 8:00min (could use some variation) - and overpowers the bassline beneath (playing solo only around 8:20)
About the mastering, wavelab global analysis confirms what i felt, the dynamic range in the track is lacking - i mean the whole track is loud troughout.
This reduces the impact & feeling of loudness during the climax (average loudness is -12.3db , dyn.range: -7.32db max to -63.15db min - normally you should have around -80db min dyn. range ...) As a result the whole track feels a bit too compressed imo.
There are other ways than compression to increase the overal loudness of the track an keep the dynamic range ...
(e.g.: Static Blue - Activa - Broken Morning :-5.13db max , - 78db min, -11.6db average)
This doesn't mean i don't like the track - quite the opposite actually.
The melody is great ! and the strings( / bagpipe?) during the break is marvellous. This is quite a piece of workmanship you guys got there, oozing with inspiration. Get signed already !
J. |
Thanks groundzero, this is really helpful feedback, thanks a lot :)
Thanks to soundrush as well :) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey pretty cool tune, I enjoyed it ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| Cloud |
Hey guys,
Your second tune is much better than your first.I love the acid , cool melody and breakdown.
About the improvements now , I have nothing else to add in what the others already said.
keep it up.
:) |
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| Mycron |
| quote: | Originally posted by nils
link is dead :( |
because the track is signed now!;) |
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| djsphere |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mycron
because the track is signed now!;) |
great news |
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| Aquascape |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mycron
because the track is signed now!;) |
Ah! Now it's gone! I see, an oversight :)
Looks like the wav's still there though |
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| sevenseas |
| quote: | Originally posted by KAKAAKlol
One of the best since "Marninx - Embrace" :eyespop:
Amazing job!
10/10 :eyes: |
Well the release of this one is featuring a Marninx remix:D |
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