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Zeitmahl - Dont Be Afraid (Speactra Remix) [Full 134 bpm rockprog]
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Speactra
Just finished this remix for Zeitmahl. You can hear the original here: www.myspace.com/zeitmahl

Please tell me how to improve it. :tongue2

Download:
Zeitmahl - Dont Be Afraid (Speactra Remix)

Cheers.
//Alexander
The Drow
I like the guitars.
The vocals sound like they have too much reverb.
Cool plucks.
I don't really like the vocals. They fit.
I think you should have some kind of 303 in here.
You also need more percussion layers imo.
The outro is too long.
Cool track man.

7.8/10
Omer
Lakeus
Hey...

The guitar is definitely nice, an original element in this kind of music. The vocals could have slightly less reverb as The Drow said. The arpeggio at 3:30 is really nice imo it could be louder or with another layer still. I havenīt heard the original one but this is nice.

Cheers, Lakeus
Speactra
Thanks for the advices.
I will decrease the reverb, and maybe add some more percussions.
Update is coming soon.
richg101
hey alex!

the first thing i thought about this was the quality of it! the kick and drive is amazing!!!!!!

woh! i love this. the vocals and guitar have been worked so well into the track... oh yea this is my style so much. no complaints at all here mate! you have a great talent. i would like the 320kbps of this if the original artist doesnt mind.. i love it!!


all i will say is that it would be cool if you did a dub.. using the vocals/guitar slighty more sparingly and making it a little more tech trance friendly. constant use of the guitar and vocals kind of makes it a bit more commercial sounding. dont ditch the vocals/guitar but use them more sparingly..

9.6/10 for me!

well worth the listen mate.

ps. your tone/washed! rmx worked the dancefloor again mate!

rich:)
>>FK
Ahh Speactra brings forth another quality tune, I dont have anything to say that already havent been said except that I Love it :D
You are showing great progress Speactra, dont stop now! :tongue2
soundrush
damn dude,

this is hot... real guitars do sound soooo much better than synthetic ones:D. i love that bassline, realy grooves in here. good drums too. maybe the beat does sound a little bit to static with that cymbal layered over the kick. alltough, great tune.:)
Speactra
Thank you all very much! :tongue2

I am going to make a more dj friendly and more intresting mix.
This is just a fast mix, and ment to be the intro in a dj set.
As it is now it's kind of repetetive and boring, and thanks for the advices, I will correct that. ;)
>>FK
oh btw, Do tell if you need more tracks mirrored :) this one for example when you are happy about the track :)
nils
rocks! good job, can't be improved

richg101
i think it would be a crime to change the reverb on the vocal myself.. it works and gives it an 80's sound. which i really cool

rich:)
YoshiXL
im only a n00b so im not gonna tell u if/what is wrong with this track. personally, i like it. hope to hear more stuff similar to this, i dig it! =D
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