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Infinityloop - Ocean Theme (full)
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| iloop |
This is the first track off the Solar Fascination EP and now supported by some great dj's, but i didn't get much feedback on it so here it is. Hope to get some from you guys :)
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| Four_On_Four-er |
Perfect intro. Love the kick and the ocean sounds.
The bass was a little too resony at first - but it grew on me as the mix carried on.
The motif is beach-like... and the whole atmosphere was laid-back. You've definately made a vibe here. The progression isn't too boring either... you time the elements well.
however, the distorted and harsher synth didn't appeal to me that much. I'm not saying get rid of it alltogether, but maybe it's just me. Good sine-leads.
The sine-lead being layered by a filtered in saw-synth was a nice touch. Gave it a trance touch that you'll either love or hate. I like it.
Aww... who could forget the sea-gulls.
The melody with those saws is, well, dancy. It's not too epic, not too memorable, perhaps a bit milked... but the theme itself was wrapped up well.
Nice touch on the saw-hits with the outro of the track. The sine-leads were keying off when the saw-hits would sharply get the last say of the phrase. Good mark of musicianship there. I appreciated that.
Good work... |
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| iloop |
thanks for the awesome feedback dude :)
any more? |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey Iloop,
Haven't heard work from you since quite a while. So it is nice to hear new work from you. I can tell you have progressed nicely as a producer. The track is nothing special melodywise and does not hook me but it is well produced with nice variety (the breakbeat section). I love the reverbed clap u use every now and then mate. The bass is also pretty darn good :)
When the lead is playing in the track you miss a chance by not adding them nice atmospheric seaish pads to accompany the lead. That would make the track a lot fuller and warmer.
Masteringwise you could try to get more clarity in your track.
Overall it is a nice track but you could spice it up more soundquality wise and make the track a bit fuller. I do like the ideas you have a lot and you are becoming better and better.
Cheers!
Nomen Nescio |
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| iloop |
| thanks nomen, its in 96k quality that could account for some of the clarity/soundquality issues, appreciate the feedback... |
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