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stelar one - teraforming (uplifting)
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| soundrush |
ok guys,
heres the final version of my track.
no fundamental changes made since the last update (added some more atmospheric effects. i also worked over the main lead and the lower pad).
stelar one - teraforming (final version)
greetings, niklas
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hey fellas,
i have uploaded the final version of my latest production.
its a usual uplifting trance track, no big innovations just a solid piece of work.
stelar one - teraforming (pre final)
im locking forward to catch some of your opinions.
greetings, niklas. |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey mate,
I am surprised no one has reacted on your track yet. I am listening and commenting as we speak:
Superb beginning, the bassline is sexual as hell. The clap you introduce could use a bit more reverb and delay so it won't sound so dry. Nice spacy sound introduced after a minute or so, a bit too loud perhaps, maybe introduce it a bit softer.
The build up is quite nice, breakdown is arrived very nicely. Hmmzz this leadsound sounds like the euphoric preset of the Korg Legacy am I right? You rush the lead a bit in the first stage. Then at around 3.50 there is a second and much better sort of breakdown and now the track really becomes quite intresting. I really enjoy this mate. It is not a memorable track but a nice well produced track with a good mixdown. Only thing missing are good fx and more changes in the percussion to give the track that extra bit of drive.
Overall I would say a nice 7 out of 10 ;)
Cheers!
Nomen Nescio |
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| Four_On_Four-er |
Yeah, man... where is everybody?
This track starts out very well! It's so smooth... the reverb hits, the bassline, and the radio clap.
Unique version of melody with the porta-sine synth.
The ahh-pads seemed a tad cheesy... but they worked. What I didn't like about them was the lower notes that I can tell were sampled below their original recording.
For some reason... the melodic structure reminded me a little bit of Trance[]Control. Trance[]Control being one of my favorite old-school feel trance-ravers. Consider it a good compliment. |
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| soundrush |
thanks for feedback guys.. :)
i took some of your suggestions and reworked the track. no fundamental changes have been made but im pretty pleased with it now.
at nomen nescio: the main lead was made with the 'superwave trance' synthesizer. i read about that korg legacy collection, nice stuff. sadly i don't got the chance to check it out yet.
bye, niklas |
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| marcusk |
Hey soundrush,
listening now...
- Not too fond of that sound in the background. Some kind of bleeping that keeps looping...starts at 1:02...but I do hear the other lead sound in the background that is more deeper, that one I like...but I think you used that before in one of your past tracks...I always try to do something different for each track I make, but that's just me...
- Kick to me sounds good, maybe slightly more precussions?
- Main part: I like the melody and rhythm a lot...makes me 'bob' my head...haha,..
Overall good track...I would definitly spin it at a party...Would you mind if I did that? |
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| Klangzentrum |
good work, as we're used to hear from you, niklas!
break sounds great! really good usage of fx and such...creates a nice atmosphere...overall a nice piece of trance, which is fun to hear...
// Lars |
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| dj_kane |
very nice niklas
its really good to hear your progress from your first sample of the track until the final version. Its seems like the first sample was your production level months ago.
love the atmospheric feel as said before.
still got that signum feel. breakdown really takes control of my emotions really brought me into the track.
disagree with the ah pads being cheesy, i think they really suit this track and the level their at is perfect.
wasnt to keen on the bleeping either mate. i think from the standard of this track you could have added something a bit nicer.
mastering is good too.
overall its a really good track, played out out loud on my speakers and it sounds like a good track to mix. going to try it out on my decks when i get a chance.
nice work! ;) |
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| soundrush |
wow fellas,
havn't thought of such response... thank you thank you very much :)
at marcus: you're right, i already used that backgroung lead in my last track spaced. generally i try to start from scratch with every song i do so this was an exeption. don't mind spinning my tracks. im pleased if you do :).
at kane: hey mate, i agree with you on that bleeping sound. it sounds a bit weird definitely. but somehow i realy like it, i wantet to give at least one unique sounds to the track. thanks for support bro :D.
bye, niklas. |
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| staticblue |
it's interesting to hear your new track, since i remember loving your last one "soundrush - spaced" :)
i like all the atmospheric sounds & fx you got going in this one. Percs i feel could need a bit more work (especially kick & clap). Bassline is really nice and your work on acid synths and whitenoise is excellent.
The bass is a bit too 'round' sounding for my taste (in terms of mixing) but overall it sounds quite full and well produced :)
Really good job on the whole, my favorite is still "Spaced" though :p |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by staticblue
it's interesting to hear your new track, since i remember loving your last one "soundrush - spaced" :)
i like all the atmospheric sounds & fx you got going in this one. Percs i feel could need a bit more work (especially kick & clap). Bassline is really nice and your work on acid synths and whitenoise is excellent.
The bass is a bit too 'round' sounding for my taste (in terms of mixing) but overall it sounds quite full and well produced :)
Really good job on the whole, my favorite is still "Spaced" though :p |
I concur, the bets of the tune in my opinion it is the ambiance, keep it up ;).
Kopi =O. |
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| soundrush |
thanks for feedback guys..
staticblue, i have to agree with you. spaced is definitely my best tune so far. i'm still trying to make a better one :). |
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| nils |
the beginning is awesome, with just the bass, drums & weird synth :p otherwise, the melody was kinda boring and a bit random. the breakdown was pleasant however, with the 'aaahh's' and whatnot
good job |
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