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Please download my track, and give me feedback!
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| Daniel Luczak |
Hi Im new to trance production and I just want some feedback on my tune so I can improve it, please download it and then give me feedback on it, thanks!!!
http://www.sendspace.com/file/vk380i
-Dan |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| If you want feedback it would be a good idea to post the track as well. |
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| Four_On_Four-er |
I had no problem finding the track on the send-space sight you posted. Was it up when you started the thread?
This seems techy at first. The progression is slow at first. The kick is deep and ominous, and the other elements have a washy clatter to them that's enjoyable to a degree.
The synth that comes in at 1:00 is very cheesy and seems uninspired. It's got a nice gate to it, but it's the same gate as the bell-synth.
No bassline? I was hoping there'd be one if the kick comes out of the ashes.
2:33 and nothing seems to be jumping out at me. This is almost experimental tech-trance, I just can't put a finger on it. Nothing is really jumping out at me, however. The hatlines are almost non-existent and the groove elements needing some revamping -- it's too repetitive.
The kick is too limp and low. It took me 20,000 bars to realize this, but It's not really helping the track all that much.
It took great lengths to get through the track. I can't say I really liked it, but someone else might.
What you should do next time is work with a more imspired melody. If you have no melody and are simply inspired by rythm, get some better samples -- experiment with bass perhaps... hats... pads. You also need to listen to EDM of various styles and learn how good artists arrange the elements in their tracks. |
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