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Mustaf - (Dancin On earth) Vocal Pumpin Trance
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| RickyM |
Hey Barry
Cool vocals in the track , and you use some nice FX as well. The bassline is unconventional, and that's cool, but perhaps a more offbeat bassline would be more driving.
Some nice synths around 2.10, sounding quite cool when the beat comes back in. Perhaps the melodies could be a little less 'happy' sounding, but you are certainly improving man, good job. |
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| richg101 |
this sounds nice now:)
overall the sound sounds nice and balanced. i think soundclick is muffling it a bit. sounds a bit closed.
break sounds interesting and well put together.
build. the single kick is too loud. it clips. set it the same as your main kicks..:)
beat comes back. this sounds original and nice. the minimal percussions work well. and allow your arps to do some driving:)
@4;16. i love the overall sound. its groovy. and i like the blippy synth.
next break - the new synth sounds a bit out of place after all the track has done so far. i would introduce it briefly earlier in the track a couple of times just to warm it in for the listener.
beat comes back - this sounds nice. the mix of layers/percs and synths all work well.
nice work barry:) |
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| dj_kane |
rickym - the only problem i have about making it less happy is that it will make the track too dark. ill have a look at the bassline and see what i can draw up.
richg - the second synth could be introduced ealier instead of jumping straight in, going to have a look at that kick. damn those kicks i never seem to get them right.
Thanks for the feedback guys, mostly positive which is a good sign.
Cheers! |
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| kopi_luwak |
Listening mate, the vocals are a nice addition, this could work pretty cool into a first person shooter, you know the robot factory or sort of, I am not very sure the arpegio change from minor to major it's a good idea, the tune had an interesting vibe, and then became kinda happy, but that's my personal taste lol.
Nice Fx's over the vocals.
In overall, is sounding pretty decent, I personally would like more if the tune keeps the first seconds vibe, the happy arpegiator is not of my liking, the mixdown sounds pretty good also, but I am listening with pc speakers so I will avoid to comment about that.
Keep it up ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| dj_kane |
guess ill have to change those happy sounds to something more dark and weird. lol
cheers mate! |
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