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New Production, New Sounds.. Check It Out!
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| SmellsExcellent |
OK, yes, its been a while... the production itself took around a month of "in between ski racing" time, but mp3.com's slow ass took its sweet time actually getting it up. but, hey, its free so no complaints here. anyways my new song "progression" is online ready for download.. go check it out and leave me some feedback. i need to know what is working and what is not.. thanks to everyone who takes a look!
its a more trance-oriented song, but i stall havent gotten the feel yet. help me!
http:/mp3.com/msse
cheers
-Marc |
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| Peter Campbell |
first off bring that kick up and your main synth line is to strong, turn it down a little. the sound of your synth line is really good.
you need more of a melody the grabs you and more of a progression of smaller sounds at the start to bring your track in.
your work is comming along, keep trying:) |
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| SmellsExcellent |
thanks a TON! you never cease to amaze me, always there to help a struggling artist out!! Keep it up, man, we all appreciate it.
-Marc |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Maybe a bit more percussion/hihats to get it going?
And perhaps tweak those ts404 lines a bit, they just sound so "your-typical-Fruity-track" if you know what I mean :)
I like the main synth, tho... although it is too loud.
Keep it up :) |
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