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[ trance ] Zaneiro - Glacier
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| Stu Cox |
Sounds very kinda europop, it's a bit too cheesy.
I think that's partly because the synth patterns you've used are all on/off beat so make it very jumpy - try using syncopated (i.e. irregular - using dotted notes etc) rhythms or using 3/4 beat delay to give it a bit of a groove. |
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| Aquarian |
| quote: | | Originally posted by Stu Cox I think that's partly because the synth patterns you've used are all on/off beat so make it very jumpy - try using syncopated (i.e. irregular - using dotted notes etc) rhythms or using 3/4 beat delay to give it a bit of a groove. |
Agreed. Also think it needs more effects and filters. The Synths sound a bit too raw (unless that's what you were going for). |
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| ZanEiro |
Yeah I still hadn't finished with the filters, this was more a working copy. What about structure, eq, compression etc? Are they ok?
Cheers. |
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| thoughtlessjex |
I like the acid work on that white noise. Very psychedelic.
Melody very evocative of the early prog trance sound.
I like this one a lot. Good work. |
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| trancey_spacer |
| The melody is nice, and it grows on you. The choir sound is also good. I don't think its that cheesy, even though it is a bit jumpy. |
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| ZanEiro |
| Thanks for the feedback everyone! I'm not sure whether to scrap this track and start on a new one because some of you seem to like it. |
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