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[Uplifting Trance] Ry Brooks - Final Flight
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Ryarni
Hey guys, would be great if you could give my new tune Ive been working on a listen, its uplifting trance made on FL Studio 6, any feedback would be brilliant.



Ry Brooks - Final Flight


Hi-fi listen: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3715376&q=hi


Lo-fi listen: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3715376&q=lo


Full MP3 - (yousendit.com) http://s49.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...9I1NZSAFWDA0O2L


If the yousendit.com link times out, add me on [email protected] and I will send the mp3

Thanks.
Effero
You've got some good ideas, but it still sounds raw. Try to add more dimension to the arp sequences by applying effects like delay and reverb.
Depth is something that is lacking in this production. Also, I wish there was more variety during your main riff. It sounds too simple. The snare needs to be heard and is a usually one of the main driving forces in trance. The quality of this sound is really important.
Regards
Effero
dj alliance
Work on the dynamics and main riff mate, it needs to be phatter, sounds too mono. Nice ideas though.
Ryarni
Cheers guys, Ive been struggling with fatness because Im using mainly headphones to produce at the moment, and still learning, but Ive added some delay/reverb, and Ive just updated the links...
dj alliance
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Originally posted by Ryarni
Cheers guys, Ive been struggling with fatness because Im using mainly headphones to produce at the moment, and still learning, but Ive added some delay/reverb, and Ive just updated the links...


A good thing to do is Layer it, just copy and paste the synths, also a good thing to do is slightly pan some things left and right (not too much) so that thigns int he middle get room, like the bassline, kick, hats and main riff.
Ryarni
Yeah that does work well, bass slightly left and kick slightly right, nice one :D
dj alliance
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Originally posted by Ryarni
Yeah that does work well, bass slightly left and kick slightly right, nice one :D


I wouldnt pan the bass or bassline, Pan the fills and little lines . Leave the main riff, bassline, kick and hats and snare in the centre.
Ryarni
I just meant slightly, gota rid of some distortion I could hear ;)
dj alliance
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Originally posted by Ryarni
I just meant slightly, gota rid of some distortion I could hear ;)


You should never pan the bass drum or bass line, not good mate.
Ryarni
Is that more of a compression issue then?

dj alliance
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Originally posted by Ryarni
Is that more of a compression issue then?


Thumb of rule: Never use too much compression, never pan your main elements: bass drum, snare, Hi-Hat, main riff and bassline.
Ryarni
Yeah but if your bass/kick is giving out distortion then you need to adjust by compressing it dont you, obviously not kiling it
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