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What do you think of my NEW track?
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| dj alliance |
I have only worked on this for a few Hours (8 maximum) and put some idea's together, so it is not finished, nor mastered, nor mixed down, nor arranged.
Let me know what you think of the sounds used and if they work well together (some smaller fills are slightly out of key, as well as the bassline slightly, but i will sort that out later in time) and whether or not i need a main riff, or should i just use the part that comes in 1.50-2.00 as my main part? It's very repetative, but i havent developed nor arranged it, only bunged some idea's together....will sound totally different when it's mixed down and arranged properly. I'm only interested if the melody's and ideas work well together? and whether i need a main riff or not?
http://s49.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...7T0BYT3BHTM525X
What should i name it?
Any feedback welcome, cheers ppl :D
No nicking my ideas ;) or riffs and melody's :D |
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| Effero |
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| Effero |
The drum/bass is not driving partly because of disharmonic sounds. Try to get the pitch correct first. The snare sound is oldschool, make it longer with more sustain or longer reverb. The arp synth is too loud and too simple. Change the keys (notes) while playing it and make the pattern interesting by varying the sequence. Applying delay on you arp won't hurt either.
I like the drawn out pad, I think you should build your track around this and a solid drum/bass foundation first and then start adding the rest of the elements.
Keep it up
Effero |
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| dj alliance |
| quote: | Originally posted by Effero
The drum/bass is not driving partly because of disharmonic sounds. Try to get the pitch correct first. The snare sound is oldschool, make it longer with more sustain or longer reverb. The arp synth is too loud and too simple. Change the keys (notes) while playing it and make the pattern interesting by varying the sequence. Applying delay on you arp won't hurt either.
I like the drawn out pad, I think you should build your track around this and a solid drum/bass foundation first and then start adding the rest of the elements.
Keep it up
Effero |
Cheers mate, i noticed that the loops arent exactly connecting so ill work on that, will change the keey every 4 bars to keep it interesting. Pain int he arse and will take time changing it all but it will be worth it. Will change the snare yeah, its just ideas i bunged quickly together.
Do you think i need a main riff? |
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| Effero |
| quote: | Cheers mate, i noticed that the loops arent exactly connecting so ill work on that, will change the keey every 4 bars to keep it interesting. Pain int he arse and will take time changing it all but it will be worth it. Will change the snare yeah, its just ideas i bunged quickly together.
Do you think i need a main riff |
That depends on the style of music your produce, but usually a catching riff counts for a lot in trance.
Effero |
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